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The Fading Mist
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The Fading Mist |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada 
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The Fading Mist Dreams filling my nightly slumber while the moon fills the sky Shooting stars ablaze with glory in vision now I fly Within the weaving I will soar to distant, magic lands Mounted on mighty steed I ride the beach of golden sands Blending as one into the night, following moonlit course Searching for another rider sitting tall on his horse He is riding out to greet me bathed within a moonbeam Eyes sparkle with passions of life, filling with love they gleam Silently we ride together, no need of words to share Being joined in heart, mind and soul, deepest thoughts we're aware The dark sky lightens as we kiss our time comes to an end It's the end of a bliss filled night, fare thee well, my best friend He leaves as quickly as he came into the fading mist A man unknown to me in life who my heart can't resist Karen Torbiak 2001© Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
lovely writing... regards, sudhir |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
"No need of words to share ..." No need for words even here!! Fly high sweet Star. [This message has been edited by ctowen (edited 11-14-2001).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
StarTime~ A lovely write, full of action of the heart~ Enjoyed it very much~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Silently we ride together, no need of words to share Being joined in heart, mind and soul, deepest thoughts we're aware A lovely write full of tender heart. Well written. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
Thank you has a certain appeal for me Arthur The once and future King |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Silently we ride together, no need of words to share Being joined in heart, mind and soul, deepest thoughts we're aware ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ WoW Karen! Wish I had dreams like this!!  Very nicely penned my friend! ~hugs, Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
A nice write for sure...give it a go...sounds fun yuh yuh |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
this is just wonderful, wow, such a dream as I have, also. If I knew how to make the little icons, they would be clapping Sandra |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
resist not and dream let us drink love from our lips as moonbeams bathe us Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
This is breathtaking.....i need inspiration for dreaming....thanks...  Greeneyes~ |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
So sweet and romantic with a mysterious quality to it. I love it, Karen. Great work! All writing comes |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
StarTime- Very nicely penned thoughts and feelings. Really enjoyed this. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
do I ever know what this is like! |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
Beautiful images and well written! |
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Rogue24 Member
since 2001-12-01
Posts 111Ontario, Canada |
Within the weaving I will soar to distant, magic lands Mounted on mighty steed I ride the beach of golden sands A verse I have dreamed of often! Beautiful write! hugs! Ter. Alone in the dark, through my thoughts comfort I do seek, through my words I find peace. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Karen...this is yet another one of your simply awesome romances....You write them so well...The setting is perfect.. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
StarTime~ Soooooo nice to see the 'inspire' fall into InterLoper's inkwell~ Loving the very thoughts of this one - AGAIN~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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