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Isn't That Just Like Love
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Isn't That Just Like Love |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Isn't That Just Like Love ~*Marge Tindal*~  I have felt the heat of you sweeter than the sweet of you No more do I have to give until I've given all to you For in the embers of giving I find more in the heated return Isn't that just like love smoldering as yet it burns Borne upon the flames of you ashed in the remains of you No more do I need receive than to be warmed by you ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
Gee whiz.. I got to move on quickly before my screen catches on fire!! |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
quote: Yes, it is, Marge...... God bless America, my home sweet home. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah Marge, I'm find your shorter poems all that much sweeter... and enjoying this one, very much! |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Just lovely my friend Marge... jwesley |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
WOW... regards, my friend, Marge, Sudhir |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"I have felt the heat of you sweeter than the sweet of you No more do I have to give until I've given all to you" Wonderful phrasing and rhythm Marge ... a powerful piece of passion, very much enjoyed this indeed!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
What a warm and wonderful piece! I love it! |
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Domzi Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 288New York (BK) |
Great piece of poetry. Poetry is spiritual ventilation! |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
This is lovely, Marge. Wonderful to see your words echoing your happines. cor |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* and the warmth of it fills us with incredible passion. This is beautiful, Marge. I love it. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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lunatic Member
since 2001-04-20
Posts 172 |
I prescribe lots and lots of moonlight Let thy moon arise. William Blake |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
   Well, just don't put the blame on me 'Cause YOU ignite the flame in me Make me smoulder with delight After fire has burned so bright Red-hot, white-hot...how I burn Waiting here for your return To make me burn so bright with lovin' I could be a toaster oven!  Then cinders all there is to see 'Cause you have made an ash of me!!  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SongBird~ Thank you for the cute reply. Elizabeth~ I am always glad to see you, my friend~ Thank you~ Karilea~ Thanks dear lady~ JWesley~ Thank you for letting me know you enjoyed it~ Sudhir~ Regards to you also, dear gentleman. Somewhere over the last week I lost an e-mail from you ... Please resend it so I can respond. Thank you my friend~ Kit~ Ever so much, I appreciate you~ InterLoper~ *smiles* at knowing you enjoyed it~ Domzi~ Thank you so much. I sure do enjoy your 'signature' phrase. Good to see you~ Corinne~ I appreciate you, lady~ StarTime~ The fires of passion burn so beautifully~ Warming us with their very being~ Thanks gal~ LunaTic~ And you tickle me~ More Luna eh ?? I'll get a man right on it~  Balladeer~ You give me a smile when I need it most. How's about a marshmallow roast ? When only a smile will do I can count on one from you~ *BIG HUGS* Love ya'  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
lovely write Marge....very warming to the heart... Greeneyes~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I think this ones smoldering Marge..... Nice write!! On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
I often asked myself what would it be like to be close to a star, I now know because you are one. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
A marshmellow roast sounds good to me, Marge, but let's not have any talk about chestnuts roasting by an open fire...I don't care WHAT season it is!!! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GreenEyes~ Glad to know you enjoyed it~ GentleSpirit~ Big smiles just knowing you like it~ JD~ Awwww, what a lovely thing to say. Thank you so very much~ Balladeer~ Nop ... nope ... nope ... This fisherwoman knows bait when she sees it~ LOL ~ Never been sent to Adult ... and NOT going now~  Mouth full of roasted marshmallows should keep me quiet enough~  You're wonderful~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Some how I get the feeling that any flame around you would most likely be a "white" flame. It is so wonderful to see you writing from inspiration and still keeping the would be "fisherman" on the hook without tugging on their gills. Beautiful write my dear one. gv ge yuhi!! |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Marge This was such a beautiful romantic piece. Your words flowed like a warm Summer's breeze. Take care.......Sue Suetang |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge...you know this touches me, because it is so, yes, just like love!!!! Hugs! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MarkB~ You're just what I ordered up for a second dose of *smiles* Thank you .. I think blue flame burns hottest .... but, I'll settle for white~ As long as the fires are fanned .. they will burn internally and eternally~ SueTang~ So nice to see you, sweet lady. Thank you so very much for the compliment of your reply~ Martie-Sis~  I love you ... and yes, I think so too~ BIG-BIG HUGS~ *Hugs* to all~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
LOLOL!!! I can't help myself! MARGE! What's the difference between beer nuts and deer nuts? Beer nuts are $1.95 a pound and deer nuts are under a buck! Ever since the remark about chestnuts, I've had that joke on my mind and I just HAD TO SAY IT!!  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Balladeer~ LOL~ You're trolling BAIT ! ! No fair ! ! I just might BITE ~ Okay .. so roll over BAIT-HOOVEN~ *Hand over mouth, guffawing right out loud* Aw, NUTS ... my other thought would get me banned ... and it even RHYMES ! You slay me deer~  Vicky was RIGHT ... my kitchen cabinet muses ARE at your house ! ! Sliter, Twiter and Tambra ... COME HOME ! !  *Hugs* ~*Me*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- Yep...that IS 'just like love'. Liking this lots and smiling for you. Isn't Balladeer a riot?! Yep...I do believe I was right about Sliter, Twiter, and Tambra! LOL! Love this, sweet buddy of mine. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Sometimes I wonder if indeed I have known love, then I read something like this that rekindles those memories……yeah! It's just like that! "Let me pierce the realm of glamour |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
you are an awesome writer Marge.... ((hugs)) |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Perfect love...written perfectly! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This is wonderful Marge! You write 'love' so well. Enjoyed! ~hugs, Nancy~ "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vicky~ Tee-Hee ! I knew you like this one~ You know exactly where my fire of inspire comes from~ AND that Balladeer is holding Sliter, Twiter and Tambra hostage ! ! Send Raspberry Hot Chocolate quickly ! Love you~ EagleOne~ Oh, sweet Eddie ... I'm so glad to stir the ashes of memories for you~ BIG HUGS you know I send your way~ Charisma~ Thank you so much, sweet lady~ It's just my little heart leaving inkprints all over the page~ Duncan~ Thank you so very much. VanDana~ Of course ... Enchantress~ *Hugs* ... Just the quilling of a heart so full of love~ Thank you~ *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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