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Dusty Rhodes Junior Member
since 2001-10-14
Posts 27 |
Touch my face in sweet caress As our eyes drink in the swirling depths Until we find what we both do seek Of what others yearn in secret thought In our hold, we will surely touch The mysteries of life we wish to keep For the moon will glow and the sun will shine As the light of our love will remain with time Walk beside and never behind The white sands of forever stretching beyond With the softness of breezes to carry along The whispers we say in soft undertones In all this life I searched for what is you Until the thunderclap of look, brought heart's throb And the world dissolved, only leaving the souls Meeting again on the roadways of time [This message has been edited by Dusty Rhodes (edited 11-27-2001).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I love the soft undertones in this... and yearning in secret thought ~Wynter "For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A common thread, time, what it brings, what it leaves behind...I like this, and to echo Maureen, soft thoughts, indeed... very nice... |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
"Meeting again on the roadways of time" Great ending line, Great write all together. Bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hi Dusty! Great write here....nice and gentle....soft thoughts. Enjoyed, hugs, Nancy. ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
A gentle passionate poem that flows over me like refreshing clear waters. Absolutely beautiful. I love it. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Dusty Rhodes Junior Member
since 2001-10-14
Posts 27 |
Thank you, Wynter, for your kind words. I appreciate them very much Sunshine, you are very nice to respond, Thank you Thank you Bernie for your read and nice reply Nancy, I am glad you enjoyed this. Thank you for being here Startime, what a kind thing to say, thank you |
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