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Open Poetry #17

Simplicity

Daniel J D
Senior Member

since 2000-10-01

Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia

0 posted 2001-11-27 02:58 AM

I noticed a tear
I asked not to fear
A rainbow appeared
The horizon brightened

I stood staring
I smiled not weeping
A sparrow landed
The tree responded

I pulled my collar
I began to shiver
A butterfly touched the flower
The hurt I had was over

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2001-11-27 05:29 AM

I wish this would happen to me..that was beautiful.

~Wynter

"For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart.
It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul."
(J.Garland)

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

2 posted 2001-11-27 10:31 AM

This poem I will cherish always, it is so beautiful. Thank you for this.

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

3 posted 2001-11-27 10:38 AM

Thank goodness for butterflies--smiles with wings!

A nice portrayal of personal healing. Loved it.

Mon Cherie

Senior Member

since 2001-10-31

Posts 922
Land of Never-ending Summers

4 posted 2001-11-27 11:51 AM

It sounds so nice... Rainbows appearing once u will yourself not to be sad. But I guess the truth is it might be much harder than it seems... but when u think positively, any sadness will blow over soon

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