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In Sleepless Dreams
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In Sleepless Dreams |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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in sleepless dreams I find you when the world fades grey when you whisper to my soul things I need to hear you say immersed in darkness lost in mind’s reality I reach out feel you reaching back for me in shadows you see me my heart, so exposed unable to keep curtains drawn doors can’t be closed you come in, take your fill leave me begging you, take more this want to please you unlike anything before as new day dawns your touch becomes memory till once again your whispers return haunting me ~SEA~ |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
till once again your whispers return haunting me ... I liked this one, SEA... For myself, I don't know for sure whether it is the dreams that follow to become reality or if reality stays back to reappear as dreams...  Regards, Sudhir |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Such a haunting but wonderful poem, dearest Susan! (smiles) Sometimes there are dreams and memories that we cherish so very much, then others we don't feel too welcome to and come back again. (sigh) BRAVO!!! Wonderful expressions, I love it! (kiss on cheek) Have a beautiful day! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Fantastic write. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
sometimes what we are left with is so haunting.......this is wonderful Sea....thank you. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Keep exploring....you'll find it, because you hear it.... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I kindof believe what we give out we receive...our fantasies do come to life in some form...James |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
I like the last two lines. Love, |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
well you already know I love this one.. hauntingly beautiful whispers. another one from the "unending ache" series  You're the hidden cost and the thing that's lost in everything I do. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
till once again your whispers return haunting me..... I loved this part very much...course the entire poem was very powerful....thanx Sue. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Susan chickie, Have I told you I love your writing...(only about 100 times right  ) I enjoyed  Wonderfully worded and very haunting...Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sea...This is beautiful! Love it! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Haunted in dreams touch becomes reality again may it last for ever and ever Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
My Stars Agnes, SEA, I hate to see just how good you are going to get when you get older..very gentle smile and a shake of my head at your talent |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Sue, Lovely write. Always tender and warm. Love it! |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Our Sleepless Dreams - We can take them where ever our hearts desire... Nicely written, Sea - HHave a Happy Birthday..  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
 Happy B-day Susan |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thank you all very much,and Logan, you are far too kind Nan and Janet...THANK YOU so far so good |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Happy Birthday Sweet Sea! |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
 thank you!!! |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
WOW!!!!A great poem and your birthday too. WOW!!!!    Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. [This message has been edited by Startime (edited 11-14-2001).] |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Happy Dirthday! ~*~ my whispers reveal my total devotion dear carried on the wind Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
   Happy happy birthday Susan. And what a wonderful poem, missed reading your work lately. (((warm hugs))) Charisma |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
I too, love the last two lines. The whole poem has such a sweet ache to it. Hope your birthday was a wonderful one, Susan. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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