Open Poetry #17 |
An Ode for every Mode |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
An Ode for every Mode Walking on the sands of time Brings a stand of billow. Though the walk is no crime it Leaves a peccadillo. Webs are made and knotted tight Emotions and notions Friendships of day and night and Some are potent potions. They carry us to extreme Some of love some of hate Seldom do we find a mean And some outlive our date. Symbols are our cobblestones The building blocks of store We travel in flesh and bone Until there is no more Yet live a bode for every road And have an ode for every mode. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Messages, oh how they influence us from the days of the hieroglyphics to the first word of a child, spoken through time only. (smiles) BRAVO!!! There are so many wonderful methods of communication, and each one has its own spirit, its own love, its own name. BRAVO!!! CLAPPING WILDLY!!! I LOVE IT!!! You are always so wonderful in your words! (big hugggssssssss) Have a beautiful day, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Walking on the sands of time Brings a stand of billow. Though the walk is no crime it Leaves a peccadillo. Webs are made and knotted tight Emotions and notions Friendships of day and night and Some are potent potions. =================================== Seldom do we find a mean And some outlive our date. =================================== We travel in flesh and bone Until there is no more Yet live a bode for every road And have an ode for every mode. ========================================= Your Ode of Mode ... is the symbol for COOL thy pen never writes a peccadillo Your signature ... cadence kissed--golden rule *winkiewinkie* my WISE rhyme Stinky You're the hidden cost and the thing that's lost in everything I do. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*giggling* oh yes, now this fits perfectly. I love it. A smile on my face and in my heart you have put this morning. Well done. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This seems to me a mighty weight a feel that I have come too late but better late than never, friend we'll stand together in the end... |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Kewl couplet Sweet Sy.. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ Once more you delight my morning senses with such brilliantly penned poetry~ Thank you for sharing~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Enjoyable. Liked the way you wrapped this one up. Peace. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
I love the rhythm and flow of this one, Seymour. Felt like I was skipping right along!! All writing comes |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
y, you can have an ode for every mode if I can have a rhyme for every time |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Andrew, Big thank you. Lone Wolf, Glad you liked. Balladeer, It's a deal. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
you write remarkably... always... regards, O poet friend, Sudhir |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy--Always a pleasure to read your words! |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Excellently expressed Seymour Oceans of emotions and roads travelled , emotions unravelled Yes apt words for wherever go emotions high or low Hope |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sudhir, Thank you my friend. Martie, Always a pleasure to say thank you. *L* HopeS, Clever comment, thank you. |
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