Open Poetry #17 |
Birched Beauty - repost |
Sunshine
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Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Birched Beauty slender and white rising high against fall's bluest sky birch beauty is splendor in motion commotion heaves among fall leaves and birch grows slowly naked, to await winter's gray and starker days to come forever reaching upward toward it's crown of stardust glory or to tickle with skeletal fingertip sun's chin, as an entreaty for yet a little more shine from which a new dress of spring sprung green shall bloom, all for the reclothing of the birch beauty in splendor ©Karilea Rilling Jungel 29 September, 2000 |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I love it! |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
This is beautiful....and that's coming from a real son of a birch |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
you reached into the nature lover inside of me with this one.....and you know I love it! Kathleen |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Yes'm, I've been foraging again! So glad that I did too, the presentation of this lovely work certainly enhanced the visuals of the written word....I admire this one much! Brava!!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, A lovely, lovely. *L* |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Karilea - You can write such beautiful free verse. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh my gosh, your lovely verse shines with the promise and starker days and seasonal stardust and foliage! (sigh) May spring again flourish and may we all be inspired by the beauty the seasons bring! (kiss on cheek) I love it so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
Karilea - Absolutely beautiful. Dave |
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