Dream about the Moon or I'll have to smash up the computer

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Open Poetry #17

Dream about the Moon or I'll have to smash up the computer

Jaime Fradera
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since 2000-11-25

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Where no tyranny is tolerable

0 posted 2001-11-25 08:36 PM

Moon
Dream About the Moon

1:
I once dreamed about the Moon.
In my dream it was dawn.
The Moon was full.
I held it in my hands.
It felt sort of like a beach ball,
Cool to the touch,
Unblemished, big and round,
Nothing like
The pitted cratter hemisphere
That one can see.

2:
We say the Moon is full
When, in fact,
It is just the sunlit half
That faces us.

3:
I held the full Moon in my arms,
Ran my fingers all around it,
Wondering
Of what precious starry stuff
It could be made,
When all at once,
It set,
My arms suddenly empty.
The Moon was gone.

Jaime

Hey, nobody’s human!

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

1 posted 2001-11-25 08:38 PM

YEA! LOL, now you don't have to smash the PC. The poem is here.

RosePetal

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since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

2 posted 2001-11-25 08:39 PM

We say the Moon is full
When, in fact,
It is just the sunlit half
That faces us."

Very Interesting write here Jaime!
Makes me think!

RP

peaches73533
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since 2001-11-04

Posts 981
OK, USA

3 posted 2001-11-25 08:45 PM

No smashing the pc tonight.Interesting write.
peaches

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

4 posted 2001-11-25 08:57 PM

Hey! There is a poem here this time! And, a good one too. So glad you got it posted...wouldn't want to have missed this one. hugs, Nancy

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Balladeer

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5 posted 2001-11-25 09:00 PM

Hey, jaime! It ws just an eclipse! Grab it again!

Midnitesun

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Gaia

6 posted 2001-11-25 09:13 PM

ROTFLMAO at Balladeer's reply. No doubt, he tells the truth.

Sunshine

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7 posted 2001-11-26 11:35 AM

Very good, Jamie. Good to see you, too!

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

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8 posted 2001-12-02 12:20 PM

Absolutely perfect, Jaime...I dream about the moon all the time...*giggling* in a very romantic way. Hold it in your arms again and it may turn into a lovely maiden who will kiss you with the magic of a moonbeam. Bravo. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Mistletoe Angel

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Portland, Oregon

9 posted 2001-12-02 12:25 PM

(smiles) Sooooooo beautiful, sweet Jaime, I love it!!! (smiles) I love the moon and in our imagination, anything is possible and our dreams can come true as lady luna winks to us all! (sigh) Soooooooo beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jaime, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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