Open Poetry #17 |
Healing (tanka) |
rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Healing When my world is dark, when i feel so alone and totally helpless, there you are to pick me up. Your love healing all my hurt. "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
...which is exactly what true love does. Very nicely said, RP |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
A very timely poem. I am not feeling alone and helpless, just ill. And the morning news made me even more ill, as I really loved that GH. Thank you. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Awwwwwww, I'm so happy for you, sweet Tara! (sigh) You deserve to be loved so so much and I just know he will bring you happiness! (kiss on cheek) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tara, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Love is so powerful, it is amazing what it can heal. I love this poem. **hugs** I am glad that you have love to heal you. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Lovely....we should all have someone in our life like this. |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
I am glad you are healed sweet friend! I wish you nothing but the best because that is what you deserve. |
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Rogue24 Member
since 2001-12-01
Posts 111Ontario, Canada |
Beautiful poem baby, I am so happy you found someone to turn those tears into smiles. Love will always guide your heart to happiness. Hugs and Kisses... Cubby XOXO |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
awwww, so sweet Tara loved this |
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NapalmsConstantlyConfused
since 2001-05-15
Posts 529 |
DeVine one..... while i appreciate the sentiment, the fact remains that the world wouldn't do too well with two of me. Therefore, i think you mean "everyone should have someone who treats them like this" :P :P :P :P :P heh. Tara, dear, as usual, your ability to express yourself so clearly in so few words leaves me feeling like i have terminal diarrhea of the word processor. beautiful, dear. -Dave |
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