Open Poetry #17 |
Love by the moonlit beach |
walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
We met by the moonlit beach A bed of sand a blanket of waves and our uncaged passion giving way to desire We kissed tenderly tasting our love as we touched The waves caressing our bodies as we became one Years passed I never forgot and when I saw you the other day in a crowded room full of friends I wondered if you remembered that night at the beach |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Walker! How could anyone ever forget a night like that??!! This just swept me away...to places warmer, sunnier. ~hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
No way...who could ever forget a night on the beach with all of the frills and ..... Nice passionate poem. |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Brings back memories.Nice write.I love ocean imagery Peaches |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Well did they? Or is that another poem? James |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
You just decribed my perfect romantic moment. I have to think the other one involvd could not forget, either. At leat we can HOPE!! Sandra I took a walk around the world to ease my troubled mind-I left my body lying somewhere in the sands of time. (3 Doors Down) |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
This is just so romantic!!! And I love the description here: A bed of sand a blanket of waves and our uncaged passion |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Wow! Who could forget that? What wonderful imagery! This is a keeper. Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Did you make sand angels? lol Who could forget that! Loved this one, walker. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* moonlight romance on a beach...how could be more perfect than that. How could he possibly forget? *sigh* I love it....visions of such love fill my mind. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
How could this person forget that night? Cor |
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