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misguided angel
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since 2001-11-23

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Australia

0 posted 2001-11-25 03:36 PM

Care to Dance, Cowboy?

I see you walk into the room
and I love the way you're dressed.
Your flannel shirt's seen better days
but at least its clean and pressed.
Your jeans have that sprayed on look,
but honey, I don't mind.
I've watched you come and go,
I think I prefer you from behind.
Your cowboy hat on your head
really shows your roots,
but you know what does it for me?
Its those hand made leather boots.
I watch you head toward the bar
then lightly step in your way.
I really couldn't help myself,
I just had to say....

Care to dance, Cowboy?

Summon the courage to step out of your familiar rut and suddenly many of those things which held you back will no longer have the power to do so.

RosePetal

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since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

1 posted 2001-11-25 03:40 PM

Andrea, I LOVE THIS!!! No cowboy could resist your direct approach. This is awesome!

misguided angel
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Australia

2 posted 2001-11-25 03:50 PM

I believe the direct approach is the only way, RosePetal.

Summon the courage to step out of your familiar rut and suddenly many of those things which held you back will no longer have the power to do so.

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

3 posted 2001-11-25 03:53 PM

Yippee! I like this. LOL at your POV:

"I've watched you come and go,
I think I prefer you from behind."

Dance on, Andrea. And welcome to the dancin blue pages.

misguided angel
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since 2001-11-23

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Australia

4 posted 2001-11-25 04:03 PM

Thanks Midnitesun. Glad I tickled your fancy

And thank you for the welcome.

Summon the courage to step out of your familiar rut and suddenly many of those things which held you back will no longer have the power to do so.

~lewisone~
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since 2001-11-23

Posts 91
Virginia

5 posted 2001-11-25 04:04 PM

AAh Yeah! Those skin tight jeans and cowboy boots will grab your attention everytime...
Love it! ~lewisone~

misguided angel
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since 2001-11-23

Posts 106
Australia

6 posted 2001-11-25 04:07 PM

You are right, nothing looks better on a cowboy.

Thanks for reading my poem.

Summon the courage to step out of your familiar rut and suddenly many of those things which held you back will no longer have the power to do so.

Poet deVine

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7 posted 2001-11-25 04:24 PM

Welcome to the family!! I loved your poem but have to tell you that there is one thing that looks better on a cowboy than tight jeans. ME! LOL I look forward to reading more from you..and check your email for something special!

misguided angel
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8 posted 2001-11-25 04:32 PM

Thank you Poet deVine. What a lovely way to be welcomed.
And I like the way you think

Summon the courage to step out of your familiar rut and suddenly many of those things which held you back will no longer have the power to do so.

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

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South Carolina, USA

9 posted 2001-11-25 04:32 PM

Nicely done...now go out and shuffle round
that dance floor..

RosePetal

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South Florida

10 posted 2001-11-25 04:33 PM

Yes, again welcome to passions and check your email : )

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

11 posted 2001-11-25 04:34 PM

Great First Post!!
I'll be watching for more from you!
~hugs, NancyLee~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

misguided angel
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since 2001-11-23

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Australia

12 posted 2001-11-25 04:37 PM

Magnus, thank you. Maybe someone would like a nice slow dance? Maybe to 'Desperado'?
RosePetal, thanks for the welcome. I think I am going to like it here.
Nancy Lee, thank you what a lovely pic.

Andrea

Summon the courage to step out of your familiar rut and suddenly many of those things which held you back will no longer have the power to do so.

~lewisone~
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since 2001-11-23

Posts 91
Virginia

13 posted 2001-11-25 04:42 PM

Magnus, you better take that invite for a slow dance before "Balladeer" gets here...You know he'll turn it up a knotch or two, or three...etc...lol

~lewisone~

*Welcome to passions,Andrea! You'll love it here,
much love ,fun,and laughter....

[This message has been edited by ~lewisone~ (edited 11-25-2001).]

ctowen
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since 2001-10-18

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Green Mountains of VT

14 posted 2001-11-25 04:42 PM

I am afraid my outfit is a bit dusty,
but now I look forward to taking them out!!

Greetings Angel!! Nice entrance ...
here's to looking front to back!

misguided angel
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since 2001-11-23

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Australia

15 posted 2001-11-25 04:47 PM

lewisone, thanks for the welcome. I think I really like it here. Everyone is a lot of fun. (Can't wait to meet Balladeer

)
ctowen, well dust off that outfit and join me for a dance.
Andrea

Summon the courage to step out of your familiar rut and suddenly many of those things which held you back will no longer have the power to do so.

Eloise
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since 1999-11-27

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Wyoming

16 posted 2001-11-25 06:00 PM

Wonderful first post. Welcome Andrea, I know you'll like it here.

peaches73533
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since 2001-11-04

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OK, USA

17 posted 2001-11-25 06:03 PM

Theres lots of cowboys and skin tight jeans where I live. Nice write, I enjoyed it.
Peaches

Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16

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Escondido-California

18 posted 2001-11-25 11:12 PM

Hi Andrea,

This is just adorable so very much enjoyed and welcome to Passions hope you enjoy your stay,

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)

Tracey
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since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

19 posted 2001-11-25 11:18 PM

Oh, I do love this one. How did I miss it earlier. This is a wonderfully cute entrance to the world of passions. A big welcome to you and I hope you stick around

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

misguided angel
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since 2001-11-23

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Australia

20 posted 2001-11-26 03:15 AM

Eloise, glad you liked this and thanks for the welcome. I like it here already.
Peaches, maybe I should come and visit sometime

Cerenity, thanks. Every one seems so friendly here.

Tracey, I plan on sticking around for a while yet. Thank you.

Andrea

Summon the courage to step out of your familiar rut and suddenly many of those things which held you back will no longer have the power to do so.

Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21

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In the winds of Cherokee song

21 posted 2001-11-26 09:29 AM

Ole Balladeer ain't a cowboy, but I will bet he will be jumpin' at this one. Great write, but ain't all cowboy poems?!

You describe the true nature well and the whole piece was a delight to read.

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

22 posted 2001-11-26 09:31 AM

We ARE a right friendly crowd! And there's several cowboys among us, so watch where you walk. [They leave their horses outside, generally, but one never knows...]

Welcome to Passions!

misguided angel
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since 2001-11-23

Posts 106
Australia

23 posted 2001-11-27 05:23 AM

Mark, thank you for your comments. So I take it you are one of the resident cowboys??
Sunshine, horse leavings don't bother me none but i will watch out

Andrea

Summon the courage to step out of your familiar rut and suddenly many of those things which held you back will no longer have the power to do so.

Alan
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since 2000-09-12

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right next door

24 posted 2001-11-28 05:46 PM

I'm no cowboy, but I sure would love to dance with you. Wonderful poem little lady
alan

misguided angel
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since 2001-11-23

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Australia

25 posted 2001-11-28 05:49 PM

Why thank you sir. So what is your pleasure?
Andrea

Summon the courage to step out of your familiar rut and suddenly many of those things which held you back will no longer have the power to do so.

BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

26 posted 2001-11-28 05:53 PM

Welcome! A great first post! I see some great talent here at Passion's, and you certainly can dance with the best!

Deb

misguided angel
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since 2001-11-23

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Australia

27 posted 2001-11-28 06:02 PM

Thank you Deb, that means a lot to me.
Andrea

Summon the courage to step out of your familiar rut and suddenly many of those things which held you back will no longer have the power to do so.

Bec
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since 2001-02-23

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Canberra

28 posted 2001-11-28 06:09 PM

My sentiments exactly!
Welcome to Passions, and I look forward to more cowboy pieces!! :P

The past is a foreign country - they do things differently there ~ Unknown

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

29 posted 2001-11-28 06:24 PM

well, it seems I missed your debut, welcome. I liked this!! You know, I never knew a cowboy

wonder if I've been missing something!

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

misguided angel
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since 2001-11-23

Posts 106
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30 posted 2001-11-28 06:25 PM

Thanks Bec. So another cowboy fan I see? Seems I have definitely come to the right place.

Andrea

Summon the courage to step out of your familiar rut and suddenly many of those things which held you back will no longer have the power to do so.

misguided angel
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since 2001-11-23

Posts 106
Australia

31 posted 2001-11-28 06:28 PM

Irish Rose, you are definitely missing something

Thanks for the welcome.
Andrea

Summon the courage to step out of your familiar rut and suddenly many of those things which held you back will no longer have the power to do so.

Interloper

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since 2000-11-06

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Deep in the heart

32 posted 2001-11-28 06:36 PM

You can see a few here in Texas, from all different angles

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

John Yaws
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Texas

33 posted 2001-11-28 06:40 PM

I like it! Wonderful write, ma'am. You bet!

misguided angel
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since 2001-11-23

Posts 106
Australia

34 posted 2001-11-28 07:41 PM

Well, Interloper, I believe the saying goes...'God bless Texas'

John, thank you so much.
Andrea

Summon the courage to step out of your familiar rut and suddenly many of those things which held you back will no longer have the power to do so.

SEA

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with you

35 posted 2001-12-03 09:05 AM

Welcome Andrea, and oh yes, those Cowboys do have a way don't they?! Sigh...

love 'em! What a great first post

LngJhnAg
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Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion

36 posted 2001-12-03 11:19 AM

Welcome aboard, lil lady.  That was a very good poem.  I like the way you ended the poem so cleanly.  The visual impact was excellent too.

Just a few words of caution... If you run across Balladeer, don't trust him with your fantasies.  He's already told me lots of secrets from other women, and I hate it when he does that.  Just tell your fantasies to me first and it will save us all a whole lot of time - lol.

As you can see, these Forums can be fun and satisfying at the same time.  I'm still working on the fun part.

misguided angel
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since 2001-11-23

Posts 106
Australia

37 posted 2001-12-03 03:58 PM

SEA, you just have to love a cowboy, don't you.

Thank you for the welcome.
LngJhnAg, Thank you for the comments on my poem. Glad to know it worked.
And thanks for the warning, I'll make sure I don't share my fantasies with Balladeer. It seems to me you know how to keep a secret so lean a little closer....whisper.

Andrea

Summon the courage to step out of your familiar rut and suddenly many of those things which held you back will no longer have the power to do so.

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