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Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2001-11-14 02:01 PM

Don’t look there,
It’s too bloody for your eye,
Don’t be here
And don’t stare,
Don’t listen as widows cry,
Turn away
And don’t stay,
It’s not for the likes of you
Just go on
Don’t respond,
You’ll be sorry if you do,
Don’t look there,
It will only make you cry.

Gloom

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

1 posted 2001-11-14 02:05 PM

*sigh* too late I already looked. I do not read stuff filled with gore and bloodshed as I find it to hard to watch. But I have a hard time not responding to your work, because I enjoy what you write and so far, at least, I have not found too much blood and gore.

well said and I hope everyone reads this and responds.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

2 posted 2001-11-14 02:05 PM

Saying a lot here...

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2001-11-14 02:11 PM

Gloom, love poems that make me think...
this one does just that!
AND...well done too!
~hugs, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

4 posted 2001-11-14 02:24 PM

Thank you, Startime,
Glad you liked this little muse,
If you don’t like blood and gore
I suggest you do not go to my site and read
The Cell Series. It’s a bit brutal.

Thank you, Decaflame,
But I just used little words..

Thank you, Enchantress,
Glad you enjoyed, I like people that think
And like to do it.

Gloom

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

5 posted 2001-11-15 12:00 PM

I looked and responded...guess I dont listen very well hehehe. Seriously, I like the way you write, I wish I could write like this.
Oh, I just noticed that you became a member of passions on my birthday! Pretty Cool!
I'll be keeping an eye out for more of your poetry....

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

6 posted 2001-11-15 12:16 PM

I never have followed directions very well. Interesting write, Gloom.

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

7 posted 2001-11-15 12:20 PM

Oh--this is wonderful my wonderful friend!
adding to my library...my new favorite from you!

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

8 posted 2001-11-15 01:39 AM

ditto Serenity - now a favorite of mine, and very well said indeed.

~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

9 posted 2001-11-23 08:15 AM

You make me smile...and even though I didn't for awhile, I have now and am making up for lost time..as you can see.

~sighing
~Wynter

"For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart.
It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul."
(J.Garland)

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