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Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2001-11-14 05:19 AM

Years roll round, seasons blending,
The sun rounds, never ending,
Circle time, ages mending, time is healing,
Pain of mine, revealing,
Aged with line, youth stealing,
Never kind, harshly feeling, years roll round.

Gloom

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

1 posted 2001-11-14 05:45 AM

yes, they do...
almost as if one begets another... and then i wonder if another begets yet another ...

regards,
sudhir

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

2 posted 2001-11-14 08:18 AM

Thank you, Sudhir Lyre,
Glad you liked it,
As many times as I rushed around the seasons
They never seem to quite meet.

Gloom

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2001-11-14 08:52 AM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Aszard, what a powerfully expressed poem about lost time! (sigh) Youth may not last forever, but the spirit of the child always sighs within us all! (smiles) BRAVO, DEAREST FRIEND!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Aszard, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

4 posted 2001-11-14 08:57 AM

Thank you, Noah,
Glad you liked it,
But I’m afraid the child has left me many years ago,
I’ll watch the children play now.
“Time keeps on slippin in to the future”

Gloom

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2001-11-14 10:29 AM

ProfessorGloom~
Nicely penned ~
I enjoyed chasing your thoughts through the 'circle time'
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

6 posted 2001-11-14 10:31 AM

The years seem to move faster as I get older but I have noticed something else...I seem to take more time to enjoy what is around me as I grow older. A wonderful poem, my friend.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

7 posted 2001-11-14 10:39 AM

In circles of time
life goes on, neverending
Cycles unbroken.

Enjoyed and well written Proff.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

8 posted 2001-11-14 11:25 AM

Thank you, Marge,
Glad you enjoyed the chase,
Follow along anytime.

Thank you, Startime,
Yes, even though time passes faster
It takes more time for the simple things,
So I’ve adapted things to make simple things easier.
Time still goes too fast no matter how I try.

Thank you, Gentle Spirit,
Pleased you liked, Circles, circles,
Spinning my life through like a hamster in a cage.

Gloom

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

9 posted 2001-11-14 10:45 PM

Professor Gloom-
   Much enjoying the way your mind works in this one.
   Nicely done, my friend.
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

10 posted 2001-11-23 08:18 AM

You always amaze me, your age is showing at least to me...but you do hide it well...to others

((hugs))

~Wynter

"For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart.
It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul."
(J.Garland)

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