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wornways Member
since 2001-10-18
Posts 204CA, USA |
twilight in dismal expanse trees fade into silhouette life forgets to breath softly falls embracing hush a tree limb lightly trembles [This message has been edited by wornways (edited 11-24-2001).] |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"softly falls embracing hush a tree limb lightly trembles"  I should have just copied all of it, this is wonderful...I really enjoyed "If your ship doesn't come in, swim out to it." ~Jonathan Winters |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
hmm.. this painted vivid pictures in my mind Love is God. Love is war. Love is what your life is for. |
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The Lonely Stranger Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 361Upstate, NY, USA |
I liked this one too .....Poet told us what he was talking about in the title, then used a wonderful, if economic combination of words to stimulate two senses. No one ever listened themselves into trouble. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This is absolutely beautiful!! Enjoyed so much...hugs, Nancy. ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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misguided angel Member
since 2001-11-23
Posts 106Australia |
wornways, your words are simple yet descriptive and beautiful. Summon the courage to step out of your familiar rut and suddenly many of those things which held you back will no longer have the power to do so. |
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wornways Member
since 2001-10-18
Posts 204CA, USA |
everyone, thank you for your kind words and thoughts. it's fun how these little tankas can become so noticed. and they're interesting to write, too. |
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