Open Poetry #17 |
Once Upon Two Dancers' Fury (a duet with Moonlight Romeo!) |
Siofra
since 2000-09-28
Posts 551State of Suspended Passion |
I wonder who I feel like tonight... When the night isn't calm When the field of wind chatters And I am noticing the absence of my love.. Lit only by the eye of moon I wait for her now She who is my all And she who is my life Hands pull from somewhere calm And I feel a pair of windows Seeing light in my storm Who bears the balm of love for my blue evening? I can only see her eyes So brown and soft Just like they were On that final evening so long ago When the storm brought us together Search me for yesterdays And I will tell you stories of love that surrendered. Two strangers never felt so wet with love Until they danced a night eye to eye A night when the music of their hearts Played that last dance of love A dance whose steps they knew And one that would never end As long as the music played Don't you hear the lilt of jealous music As it roams distances wrought With the obstacles of other voices? It demands an ear that heeds. But, this ear has always heeded Even in the midst of choirs of angels Always listening for that one voice The voice of the highest Seraphim Still singing in the darkness. . . Then heed and be still now For the touch of fingers is now dawning On a heart yawning wide with love That pulls contagion from others. But yet draw not from others But from the one who loves and is loved For only in that heart is found the music of love The music of life Others are there, but they do not sing Not like thee... No other noise they claim to call singing Could compare to love tongued beauty. All other notes unworthy All other sounds dulled. All other musics unheard All other sonatas unwritten Save but for thy voice A voice I have longed to hear Since I knew what music was . I am many. [This message has been edited by Siofra (edited 11-24-2001).] |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
You both dance very beautifully to this song. It is beautiful indeed. May the dance continue If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
You two make a nice team! Enjoyed this very much. xoxo RP |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
wonderful. . . a dance, and a song still sung. . . great job. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
this song inspires memories.. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
And may that voice whisper sweet words of love into your ear...james |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is lovely! I have no knowledge of who wrote what, only that it is a balance of conversation, and some great lines! Brava, to the two of you! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
You two dance and write beautifully together! Well done, hugs, Nancy. ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Robert A Member
since 2001-10-29
Posts 174 |
great sensuous read there one of many? ok, sounds good to me! |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
A dance of love that lights up these blue pages with the sensuality of it. This is a great duet..you both dance well together. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Siofra - a wonderful dance together, well done... BC |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fabulous...James |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Eloquent, erotic, soft and wet. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Gorgeous, beautiful writing. (I'm tromping through my library again) |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
Romantic! Eliza Simmons |
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