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Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2001-11-24 04:43 PM

A thousand beats of my heart becomes an eternity on a faceless clock.
Without you present, I am lost, struggling so.
Kindly do me a gracious gift.
Stop my heart now, that the pain might ebb and cease.

Each breath in agony of anticipation.
Each movement of the sun’s shadow lingering
longing for a simple acknowledgment of concern.
My eyes weep, my soul screams, my lips quiver
I await your presence.

The shadows long are short compared to my feelings
for I can only express this wait.
Lingering loneliness ever deep inside me.
I wish to turn back time
for time tortures me now.

The trees join me, their branches bowing under weight
Tons of sadness straining their energies
as mine own fill me and overflow

Return my love, I long to hold you.
Will you again come to me?

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2001-11-24 05:22 PM

Return my love, I long to hold you.
Will you again come to me?
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
oh Barry....there you go again....wanting to hear the pounding of my heart....well, it is!
This is great! I'm off to make the coffee!
hugs, Nancy

~Life may not be the song you requested,
But as long as you're here you might as well dance~

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

2 posted 2001-11-24 09:24 PM

Thanx Nancy....been out playing miniature
golf with family....Glad you liked this..
Thanx...and yes, two spoons..

Tracey
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since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

3 posted 2001-11-24 10:18 PM

What a lovely piece about missing someone and awaiting their return.

Return my love, I long to hold you.
Will you again come to me?

I just love those last two lines.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

doreen peri
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since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

4 posted 2001-11-24 10:21 PM

beautiful writing........ wonderfully romantic.....

~lewisone~
Member

since 2001-11-23

Posts 91
Virginia

5 posted 2001-11-24 10:27 PM

Magnus.....What can I say, this is simply just beautiful, creative writing in it's
best form.... ~lewisone~

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

6 posted 2001-11-24 10:36 PM

Thanx Tracey...I just enjoy going off on
a tangent and going deep into my soul in
a creative way.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

7 posted 2001-11-24 10:36 PM

Thank you Doreen, my pleasure.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

8 posted 2001-11-24 10:38 PM

Sharon, happy that you enjoyed this from
the gut creativity....I like letting myself
go from time to time.

rwood
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since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

9 posted 2001-11-25 09:32 AM

Bravo! I always love to read uninhibited verse of longing and desire from the male poet's point of view. It's in you all but You do it so well. Beautiful!

Sincerely,
Regina

It's all in the mind
Except for what's in the heart.
http://www.mygem.net/heartquill

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

10 posted 2001-11-25 10:13 AM

Thanx Regina, Just flexing my pen...

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