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Destiny Calls |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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Looks like another journey although many miles have passed my destination's cloudy but it seems that nothing lasts. Another vista beckons verdant green and close to sea though haze is wrapped around it still this vision calls to me. A destiny uncertain full of holes and bits of lace seek that behind the curtain lest life gone wthout a trace. Touching warmth before it's gone feel the gaze of hungry eyes somewhere in the vast unknown time for me, of this I cry. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssssss) Sweet sorrow fills your honest and heartwrenching golden heart, sweet Sandra! Very soon you will feel the warmth again, and it will glow inside of your heart forever when you are embraced by true love that He is preparing for you. (sigh) Oh Sandra, I've missed you so so mucha nd your lovely words! (kiss on cheek) I hope you had a Happy Thanksgiving! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sandra, as always mingled sorrow and tears flow from your pen. Very poignant write. Lynne Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sandra, Sounds like destiny to me. Enjoyed *L* |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I wonder if destiny calls collect. . . great job Sandra. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Home is where the heart is ... even the most heavy heart. I hope you find that wich seems so elusive to your grasp ... time, something difficult to hold. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Touching warmth before it's gone feel the gaze of hungry eyes somewhere in the vast unknown time for me, of this I cry. Reach out and touch someone...~Not to pun...your heart is still golden. The shores are beautiful. I imagine you walking along in the sun and finding a treasure! A truly great write. Sincerely, Regina |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
a beautiful poem, Sandra. Hope your holiday was a nice one. hugsss ~Wynter |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
oh Sandra, this is melancholy..... sad but hopeful...yes...sad but hopeful. Kathleen |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Touching warmth before it's gone feel the gaze of hungry eyes somewhere in the vast unknown time for me, of this I cry. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Beautiful heart-wrenching write Sandra. Your time will come...and soon!  Love and hugs, Nancy. ~We are a soul...dancing in a glimpse of time~ |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Sweet sister, be well. Keep reaching. Your heart is beautiful. *Peace you. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Very touching Sandra....keep grasping... one day a star will arrive and whisk you away... |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
A destiny uncertain full of holes and bits of lace seek that behind the curtain lest life gone wthout a trace. ---------------------------- And is there any one whose destiny is certain?...I wonder A beautiful deep piece Sandra.....but the heartfelt sadness is still there. I hope you'd get over it soon.... Take care..... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
This made my heart sad.Very touching.Know that you will love and be loved again. Peaches(hugs) |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
catalinamoon - I can relate to your writing very well. Thank you for sharing it... BC |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Another lovely one from you Sandra. Who knows where destiny will take us. The journey is always interesting, if a little painful at times. But our sorrows make us stronger, and wiser for the next time If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Sandra, Very beautiful poetry here, yes sad but I to believe of a new horizon just beyond that star that continues day and night to shine upon you friend and I truly hope only the very best come your way, Love ya much, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. |
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