Open Poetry #17 |
Wings Of The Dove |
Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Wings Of The Dove By: Noah Eaton 11/15/01 Meringue feathers flutter onto a woman's lap Reflecting rainbows from the heavens blue satin window Trinkets of eternity whispering to her ears It was the day she would be queened in loves windrow Being a fugitive of her own fate she screams in rapture Dancing beneath the ala mode moon, her heart tomorrow will leap Her shoulder is caressed by a welcoming wing of midas She looks up to see her dove warbling to her heart, with a parchment in its beak She reads it to herself, holding the cinnamon print in hand Smelling the spices in seasonal blend, she sighs in relief Her dove perched on her shoulder proud, answering in merry trill She scans the calligraphy, and she slowly reads "Fear not, lovely lady, for I belong to your heart For I am merry to sleep in the wings of a dove That you weave for me, with all your heart's content I will bring you the stars and the moon, my lady love" She folds the paper back up, tucking it to her beating heart Smiling in deep sigh, kissing the blueberry pie skies Spinning in her winter white dress, reflecting the mother moon As violet lashes of an angel light the pale heavens with light And the dove soars with the cinnamon moon Brushing whispers of light in her gentle flight For now this woman knows his love for her is real For her heart rests in the wings of a dove…where his love resides [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (edited 11-15-2001).] |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*sigh* how beautiful penned. Love it!! Charisma ~*TMP*~ [This message has been edited by Charisma (edited 11-15-2001).] |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
*GASP* this is breath-takingly beautiful dear Noah! If I had to pick one of your poems to call my favorite, I honestly don't think I could choose just one because all of them are incredible! Ok, Ok, so maybe I favor your poem "JOANNA" , can you blame me? lol. ((warm hugs)) Joanna [This message has been edited by RosePetal (edited 11-25-2001).] |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Noah, how beautiful.Your desription of colors, birds, and spices tantlize me.You have made my heart melt again. Peaches |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Mistletoe Angel - another fine write. Very pleasant to read... BC |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Another beauty, Noah. The imagery is great, with cinnamon and blueberies...a tasty love song. |
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