Open Poetry #17 |
A Kiss |
Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
A Kiss I still recall the chord of bliss The night I came to know So sensuous a tender kiss Though many years ago I still can feel this precious moment Standing still in time For I engraved a golden dream Into this heart of mine A passing kiss, still etched within That over time and space No distance has diminished And the years cannot erase Elizabeth santos |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
this kind of feeling lives in your poetry, thank you for sharing something so intimate and beautiful with us. Kathleen |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
We need these kinder memories, even if they represent just precious moments in the overall grey picture. Enjoyed. "Happy people have no history" - French Proverb |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I do believe this is one thing we all want to have forever in us....That one special moment of tenderness bestowed upon us by someone dear to us. VERY well written, thank you. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Elizabeth, I never thought one kiss could in memory be like this Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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~lewisone~ Member
since 2001-11-23
Posts 91Virginia |
Precious memories....What would we do without them...Very well expressed, lovely poem, takes us all back a moment in time. ~lewisone~ |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
I can still remember my first kiss like it was just yesterday. Thanks for bringing back the memory Elizabeth. I believe kisses and hugs are the best signs of affection. Good write! RP |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
forever being. . . wonderful my friend. . . ----------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
I like seeing beauty like this remembered.. -Lynne It's nice to share - kiss someone when you have a cold. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Elizabeth, a beautiful write of a beautiful memory. hugs, Nancy. "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* sensuous memories that last a lifetime. Magnificent. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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