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Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

0 posted 2001-11-24 12:22 PM

A Kiss

I still recall the chord of bliss
The night I came to know
So sensuous a tender kiss
Though many years ago

I still can feel this precious moment
Standing still in time
For I engraved a golden dream
Into this heart of mine

A passing kiss, still etched within
That over time and space
No distance has diminished
And the years cannot erase

Elizabeth santos

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

1 posted 2001-11-24 12:27 PM

this kind of feeling lives in your poetry, thank you for sharing something so intimate and beautiful with us.

Kathleen
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

RSWells
Member Elite

since 2001-06-17

Posts 2533

2 posted 2001-11-24 12:52 PM

We need these kinder memories, even if they represent just precious moments in the overall grey picture. Enjoyed.

"Happy people have no history" - French Proverb

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

3 posted 2001-11-24 01:01 PM

I do believe this is one thing we all want
to have forever in us....That one special
moment of tenderness bestowed upon us by
someone dear to us. VERY well written,
thank you.

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

4 posted 2001-11-24 01:41 PM

Elizabeth,
I never thought one kiss
could in memory be like this
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

~lewisone~
Member

since 2001-11-23

Posts 91
Virginia

5 posted 2001-11-24 01:50 PM

Precious memories....What would we do without them...Very well expressed,
lovely poem, takes us all back a moment
in time.
~lewisone~

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

6 posted 2001-11-24 01:59 PM

I can still remember my first kiss like it was just yesterday. Thanks for bringing back the memory Elizabeth. I believe kisses and hugs are the best signs of affection.
Good write!

RP

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

7 posted 2001-11-24 02:02 PM

forever being. . .

wonderful my friend. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Yu Lan
Senior Member

since 2000-04-13

Posts 1462
New Zealand

8 posted 2001-12-03 07:38 PM

I like seeing beauty like this remembered..

-Lynne

It's nice to share - kiss someone when you have a cold.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

9 posted 2001-12-03 07:53 PM

Elizabeth, a beautiful write of a beautiful memory. hugs, Nancy.

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

10 posted 2001-12-03 09:26 PM

*sigh* sensuous memories that last a lifetime. Magnificent. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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