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Visions of Paint
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Visions of Paint |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Visions of Paint When the sun is down and moon bright And clouds fly bye in silver light Magic moments, fantasies smile Bring us ghosts and phantoms wile. Shadows dance on a turning stage Your inner dream becomes of age. Freed from bondage, released from jail Paid by the winds and billowed sail You’ve entered a world of naïve In weave of a pleasured believe. Walking on velvet, scarlet skies Living ecstasies golden sighs. You are a butterfly a dove You are a loving heart in love. You’re the esprit of want to be The very spirit and donee You’ve entered one door of your goal Touched the enigma of your soul. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful visions, Sy! Lovely! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I tripped the light fantastic on the brush of painter's stick on the candle's lighted wick in the dream of rush so thick and I drew it to me... big smiles here... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Denise, Thank you for the beautiful. *L* Sunshine, Thank you for the big smile. *L* |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
The artist of words paint a delicate verse Lovely Liz |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you sweet Elizabeth. Sy |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
When the sun is down and moon bright And clouds fly bye in silver light ====================================== Shadows dance on a turning stage Your inner dream becomes of age. ===================================== You’ve entered a world of naïve In weave of a pleasured believe. Walking on velvet, scarlet skies Living ecstasies golden sighs. You are a butterfly a dove You are a loving heart in love. You’re the esprit of want to be The very spirit and donee You’ve entered one door of your goal Touched the enigma of your soul. ========================================= thy poets pen,thy painters palette ... velvet visions before my eyes ink becomes brushstoke ... and my world is filled with butterflies *winkiewinkie*  (ohhowilovewhenyouwritelikethis)   oh how i love when you paint like this  "If I could fly ... I'd pick you up ... I'd take you into the night ... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, And OH how I love when YOU write like this. My sweet Tinkerbel Winkiewinkie Randy Stinky. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy- You paint the sky with your minds eye and I see the heart is where you start. Just lovely! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Beautiful painting, Sy. Very captivating poem. Sandra |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
You are a butterfly a dove You are a loving heart in love. You’re the esprit of want to be The very spirit and donee You’ve entered one door of your goal Touched the enigma of your soul. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Love this Sy! You always manage to give me goosebumps with your writing...this one is no exception! Beautiful! hugs, Nancy. ~Life may not be the song you requested, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Vandana, Thank you Martie, Thank you sweet. *L* Nancy, Goosebumps are good. *L* |
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