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Romeo
Junior Member

since 2001-06-13

Posts 43

0 posted 2001-11-21 08:18 PM

Moments swam slowly in horrifying silence

Horizons drowned behind my sun absence

Darkness conqured the beautiful veiw

It signed the death of my heart's flow

O'my Sunto where you gonna disappear

Where do u wish to pour the magical tear

in different zone or another harbour?

I wish I'd be your ray's persuer

To trace your golden trail

To attend your phenomenal lefting veil

To be washed by your metropolitan drop

And tomb my soul for ever as I rub and sup

[This message has been edited by Romeo (edited 11-21-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Romeo - All Rights Reserved

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

1 posted 2001-11-21 08:33 PM

this is hauntingly beautiful!

Kathleen

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2001-11-21 08:38 PM

Very well done Romeo. Lovely music and picture as well.
~hugs, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

Romeo
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since 2001-06-13

Posts 43

3 posted 2001-11-21 08:49 PM

Irish Rose

I really thank u dear for ur kind words

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Enchantress

Thanks my dear 4 ur sweet and lovely compliment

Romeo
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since 2001-06-13

Posts 43

4 posted 2001-11-21 08:49 PM

Irish Rose

I really thank u dear for ur kind words

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Enchantress

Thanks my dear 4 ur sweet and lovely compliment

Romeo
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since 2001-06-13

Posts 43

5 posted 2001-11-21 08:50 PM

Irish Rose

I really thank u dear for ur kind words

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Enchantress

Thanks my dear 4 ur sweet and lovely compliment

Romeo
Junior Member

since 2001-06-13

Posts 43

6 posted 2001-11-21 08:50 PM

Irish Rose

I really thank u dear for ur kind words

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Enchantress

Thanks my dear 4 ur sweet and lovely compliment

Romeo
Junior Member

since 2001-06-13

Posts 43

7 posted 2001-11-21 08:50 PM

Irish Rose

I really thank u dear for ur kind words

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Enchantress

Thanks my dear 4 ur sweet and lovely compliment

Romeo
Junior Member

since 2001-06-13

Posts 43

8 posted 2001-11-21 08:50 PM

Irish Rose

I really thank u dear for ur kind words

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Enchantress

Thanks my dear 4 ur sweet and lovely compliment

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

9 posted 2001-11-22 12:00 PM

*sigh* how incredibly romantic. This is a poem that left me wanting more. Very well done.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Romeo
Junior Member

since 2001-06-13

Posts 43

10 posted 2001-11-22 04:46 AM

Startime

Thank u so much 4 the lovely visit and I'll bring more....
I appreaciate ur awesome wrods

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

11 posted 2001-11-22 01:42 PM

Stunningly beautiful write, Romeo.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Romeo
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since 2001-06-13

Posts 43

12 posted 2001-11-22 06:03 PM

Lone Wolf

thanks wolf 4 ur sweet words

Domzi
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since 2001-09-08

Posts 288
New York (BK)

13 posted 2001-11-22 08:45 PM

All I can say is...absolutely beautiful.

emily
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 142
USA

14 posted 2001-11-22 09:55 PM

this is lovely

Romeo
Junior Member

since 2001-06-13

Posts 43

15 posted 2001-11-23 05:45 AM

Domzi

and also, I can say that u r so wonderful

emily

thanks dear friend 4 u sweet words

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

16 posted 2001-11-23 06:03 PM

"O'my Sunto where you gonna disappear

Where do u wish to pour the magical tear

in different zone or another harbour?"
I wish to pour it away
somewhere where it would never be again
where I'd see the end of this torturing pain
but in my soul it seems to remain
and you.....
you.....
can you take it away?
with your poetic refrain?
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Wonderful toutching and magnificent lines Romeo...
They seem to speak to my heart....

Thank you and keep up the good work...
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"Oh...me!Oh Life!
Of the questions of these recurring..........
Of myself forever reproaching myself,
for who more foolish than I......"
~Whitman~

Romeo
Junior Member

since 2001-06-13

Posts 43

17 posted 2001-11-24 01:10 PM

MEM,

here's my soul

here's my body

all wish to have your tears

flow them in my heart forever

let me taste their dew when shiver

cause my refrain'll abandon your fears

and fondle your divine essence

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My dear MEM, I don't what 2 say about ur outstanding and amazing words...I'm really speechless

Thanks alot from the bottom of my heart dear friend 4 the lovable visit...

Take care

[This message has been edited by Romeo (edited 11-26-2001).]

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