Open Poetry #17 |
My Siren still sings |
Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
I heard her song of beauty as I leapt to closer be I swam toward the shoreline, but she I could not see A kiss then as I tired and sank to be with love Forever to be sung to, as all that sailed above |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Short, sweet and beautiful. I like this If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Swept away by a wave of love, Rick? Well done. Now come out of the water depths and sail us another one. |
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wornways Member
since 2001-10-18
Posts 204CA, USA |
love so powerful alluring in its promise until in its song one becomes lost forever to those not understanding WARNING: this reader is not prone to terse, canned comments. [This message has been edited by wornways (edited 11-24-2001).] |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
The allure of the singing siren...you sailor you! How the man befit her dreams She drew from him his force Settling in beneath the streams Her White Knight on love's sea horse You still inspire! Thank you Rick. Sincerely, Regina It's all in the mind |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Tracey, short and sweet at times seems to express more, thank you for your kind reply. Midnitesun, thank you for your reply, I shall awaken from the depths and return, you can be sure of that and hopefully treat you to another. wornways, thanks for the reply, and your post, much enjoyed. Dear Regina, if I inspire verse as this, I must keep posting replies. Thank you for your inspiring words as well. Sincerely Rick Thank you to you all. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Very beautiful, I love your phrasing.*S ~Wynter "For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. |
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