Open Poetry #17 |
Going Home |
~lewisone~ Member
since 2001-11-23
Posts 91Virginia |
"Going Home" Darkness comes early, the clouds burst with stars, The moon shines ever so brightly as I wonder where you are.... I see the star that's twinkleing, could that be communication from you to I, It all is so beautiful, as I turn my imagination to the sky.... We know our Heavenly Father is watching us from above, If we could get visas' up, we could visit the ones we've loss and loved.... I guess he foresees our future, and he knows the lives we mourn, But wouldn't it be awesome to visit and speak to those that have gone home.... I speak to you daily through prayer, and I know you hear what I say, I still think it would be so awesome to visit, if only for a day.... ©Sharon E. Lewis 2000 |
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Secret Whisper Member
since 2001-01-25
Posts 298Through the Looking Glass |
This piece is so simple and yet so true. Wonderful writing. The vernacular adds something to it. Quod me nutrit me destruit. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sharon....much enjoyed this...don't we all wish for just a day...but it would also be sad to once again say goodbye.... |
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~lewisone~ Member
since 2001-11-23
Posts 91Virginia |
Thank you both for your kind comments, and yes, Magnus, saying goodbye the second time would be very difficult indeed..... ~lewisone~ |
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