Open Poetry #17 |
Shadows and Corners |
Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
There are so many corners and shadows in each individual heart. Even when we feel we know someone really well, there will still be shadows and corners that we can never reach. And that's OK. I don't need to see the whole of you. Bits and pieces of your rainbow will do. The rest of you can be a mystery, the more to intrigue me. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
We all need a bit of shadow and corner in which to keep ourselves...this appeals to me, for many reasons, so, it goes without saying [but it never should...] I like this! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Midnitesun, Cute, enjoyed the read. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Sunshine, it's true, we need a corner of privacy. I keep tellin my dog that, but he doesn't want to listen to me. Seymour, nice to see you this morning. Thanks for sharing my corner for a moment. |
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Pell Member
since 2001-09-16
Posts 134Pacific NW |
Hehe, I love to be intrigued! The mysteries we all hold close to us are what make discovery all the more delightful, and neverending. Enjoyed this one much. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hi, I like this. It's true. better to not know everything but keep a little mystery going. Sandra |
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Contabo Member
since 2001-11-21
Posts 159 |
Shadows hold true reality |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Pell, thanks for visiting. You said it...a never ending mystery. Sandra, it does make life more fun. Nothing beats a good quest to get life's juices flowing. Contabo, thanks for more food for thought. If the shadows hold the truth, are the corners where we shelter our fantasies? |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Bits and pieces of your rainbow will do. ==================== I love the sincere simplicity of that lovely poetic thought and image. very cool Kacy "If I could fly ... I'd pick you up ... I'd take you into the night ... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
JM, thank you, for taking time to read and reply, and for always sharing bits and pieces of you. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
yes, but what's in the shadows is very interesting sometimes. . . wonderfully done. . . ----------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Sven, I love those shadows and corners, where mystery and intigue can blend with the reality and fantasy. Thanks for visiting some of the shadowy corners of my mind. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Yes! I love this piece. To know someone is to know that you can't possibly know everything about them. We are never as shallow as people think. I hope most humans are deep feeling souls. I give them the benifit of the doubt anyways. Saving this. Sincerely, Regina It's all in the mind |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Regina, thanks for the visit. I agree. Most people are deeper than the depth of the ocean, we are lucky when we see the tops of the waves. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Hey now! I really, really enjoyed this. So much said in so little. Great big soul you have there my friend. jwesley |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
jwesley, thank you for your sweet kindness, and for sharing bits and pieces of your heart. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Midnitesun, I'm bringing a really monster big light! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Larry, ya better make it a zillion watter. LOL. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Kacy, this is a cool write! I believe in leaving something to the imagination...whether it be in corners or shadows. Hugs, Nancy. ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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