Open Poetry #17 |
I Heard Your Tender Call |
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I heard your tender call it resounded in silence, quietly, softly soulfully, skillfully, rejoicing in my heart behind closed eyes I heard soft cry a mind meld of thoughts impart I felt your tender call you were there, so long ago, a heartbeat away in keen memory your words still sway to dance the dance of night’s long song wherein these dreams your thoughts belong did I dream your tender call lace strewn veil of sweet shadows soft holding pleasant gentle of your touch then wing me upward, swift hold me aloft thy tender call is the voice of such I heard your tender call it sang soft, soulful sweet and true as it came from the heart’s heart of you ably it came from behind the refrain that I would hear it, again and again when you tenderly called my name 23 November 2000 ©Karilea Rilling Jungel revised 22 November 2001 |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
tenderly beautiful |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
~it sang soft, soulful sweet and true as it came from the heart’s heart of you ably it came from behind the refrain that I would hear it, again and again~ *sigh* Beautiful penned! ~*Theresia~* |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
From the heart's heart of you ... Most excellent!! Quite touching! |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Wow, you excelled with this one sunshine, I'm burning my pen as we speak, into my library it goes, thanks for sharing. Regards, Olias. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
The softest voice and poem I've read. As a feather it floats verse to verse. Very beautiful Sunshine. Sincerely, Regina |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sunshine--To hear the tender takes a heart of same..like yours, sweet one. |
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