Open Poetry #17 |
With Tenderness I Will..... |
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
With tenderness I will caress you With kindness I will address you With love I will ever hold you for my heart treasures you now. With emotion words will flow to With passion I will adore you With consideration I will give you For you deserve this and much more. Through wisdom I will remember Through age I will bestow you Through words I will admire you In my soul, you are a part of me. I will bestow you hope, peace, love I will be a guiding light up above I shall hold your hand as we live a life together, to share and give. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
such a tenderly written one... Regards, sudhir |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is very tender and lovely! Oops my turkey is done! Kathleen |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Now this is the way to love. You write it so well, Maguns. Enjoyed. All writing comes |
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~lewisone~ Member
since 2001-11-23
Posts 91Virginia |
Exceptionally sweet.....If written for that special someone, it's sure to win her heart, for it was written so beautiful and tender you can tell it came from the bottom of yours.Look forward to reading more of your work.....~lewisone~ |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
A man who will write these words to his wife is blessed indeed....and she is very fortunate. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Beauiful Magnus, and yes, she is very fortunate! |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Yes, we can see that "with tenderness you do.." Beautiful and filled with all the love you have for your wonderful wife. You keep love alive in a beautiful way, Magnus. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Barry, well done! From your lips to her heart. Lovely. Hugs, Nancy. ~Life may not be the song you requested, |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I thank all of you for your comments... It is late...I will individually comment tomorrow....thanx again. |
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