Open Poetry #17 |
As HE Died For You |
Robert William Gruhn Member
since 2001-11-06
Posts 168California, USA |
As HE died for you Held fast By hatred's unholy crucible Drawn limbs take leave of sockets blue Head hangs in forsaken sadness For those responsible Forgiveness granted In abscence of understanding All future wrongs Laid on agony's shoulders Spikes of torture's indignity Pierce miraculous hands, clenched and bleeding Suffering Crucifixion and death Just to save all us sinners |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
In our journey through time, we need to be reminded of his sacrifice for us, and not just at Christmas and Easter. We need to remember, all the time.....thank you for this, Robert..... ...you are me, I am you, we are one... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes and I am thankful for his love and sacrifice...James |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
and on this day let us all be thankful that He did... "Psalm 84:5 Psalm 84 Psalm 84:4-6 Blessed are those whose strength is in you, who have set their hearts on pilgrimage. Kathleen |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
It is a debt we can never repay. Great write, Robert. All writing comes |
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Secret Whisper Member
since 2001-01-25
Posts 298Through the Looking Glass |
wonderfully explicit! One of the better crucifixtion pieces I have ever read. It does a true justice to the Sacrifice. Very well written piece. Quod me nutrit me destruit. |
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NapalmsConstantlyConfused
since 2001-05-15
Posts 529 |
and even for those of us who are non-Christian, this is a powerful piece. go RWG, this is great stuff. you have a true talent. -Dave "That which does not kill me merely delays the inevitable" |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Sir Robert, No candy coating here! And He did it for me. Sin isn't fair, but God got even, grace isn't fair either. larry c |
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Domzi Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 288New York (BK) |
...and everyday I thank HIM for all he's done for me. Great poem! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
What a gift He gave. Beautiful expression, Robert! |
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