All in vain-- I can't hide my feelings for you

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walker
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since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-11-21 07:59 PM

Let it rain
on my heart
to quiet
the desire that
for you I have
Only one touch
from your hands
and I succumb
to this passion
I try to hold back
my yearning
I don't want to show
too much
afraid that it's too raw
All in vain
I can't hold back
and it's sips through my veins
and drives my body
in the search
until I find you
Eager to please me
Completely surrendering
my fears disipate
anticipating
our fusion of love

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

1 posted 2001-11-21 08:35 PM

Love doesn't hide easily, does it? Enjoyed this one alot, walker.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2001-11-21 08:40 PM

Wow! I love this one walker!
So much passion and feeling revealed.
~hugs, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

RosePetal

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since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

3 posted 2001-11-21 08:43 PM

Walker, I absolutely love the way your words flow. Good Write my friend.

RP

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

4 posted 2001-11-21 09:15 PM

THIS is a love poem....very well done, walker

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

5 posted 2001-11-21 09:22 PM

My oh My....there is enough passion an energy
to light all the lights from coast to coast.
And then blow the bulbs out....Nicely done
Walker.

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

6 posted 2001-11-21 09:32 PM

Sounds like a great Thanksgiving is planned. LOL at Magnus' reply.
Well done, Walker!

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

7 posted 2001-11-21 10:55 PM

With true love, there is no need to gide. Wonderful, walker.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Pell
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since 2001-09-16

Posts 134
Pacific NW

8 posted 2001-11-21 11:41 PM

A terrific expression of desire and anticipation, Walker. I love this one!

Magnus...how many poets does it take to change a lightb--er... nevermind

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2001-11-22 05:09 AM

The love is flowing...James

Kit McCallum

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since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

10 posted 2001-11-22 06:44 AM

Beautifully written Walker ... a lovely flow throughout, much enjoyed!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Tracey
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since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

11 posted 2001-11-22 07:28 AM

Great write Walker. A lot of anticipation, some angst, and a lot of feeling in this. I like this one a lot. I can relate to this

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

12 posted 2001-11-23 12:54 PM

walker - I say that love is very difficult to hide, but you have said it well.

BC

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