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morning's fresh rays |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium 
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roads shimmer through mist in this cold morn's slanted light ~it is winter here~ "I was born intelligent - education ruined me" [This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (edited 11-14-2001).] |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
As I recall, just over a year ago your were saying you were going to write some haiku one day. I knew you would do it well regards to you, Jamie There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
in this cold morn's slanted light =============================== NOW look who is being BRILLIANTin his consise, poetic succinctity. shining like the sun poet sir  well done dear Sudhir  You're the hidden cost and the thing that's lost in everything I do. |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Very well done it is getting hotter here total opposite |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh Sudhir, this is soooooo beautiful! I love the tranquility and nature of a winter blizzard, it always feels so refreshing and enchanting to me! (smiles) I love it, you write haiku so beautifully! Have a beautiful day, sweet friend! (smiles) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sudhir, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sudhir, Well done my friend. Enjoyed |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thank you very much, my friends... Regards to all, Sudhir |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sudhir~ Hoping you can know Warming embers of sweet love To keep you sheltered Until the spring comes springing Filling your heart with new joy *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Beautifully done and filled with the special warmth of winter. I love the mornings. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Perfect! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
EXQUISITE!! ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
ah my friend. . . you have spoken of those mornings perfectly. . . well done. . . and I love your quote!!! ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
...and you can do haiku too?!! Beautiful, Sudhir! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thank you all my dear friends from this poetic heaven... for your kind words of appreciation... it helps me a lot, you know? a special thanks to Marge for teaching me this form and to a few of you, who know, who have hepled me learn this form in a better way... Regards at all, Sudhir |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Sudhir- Very nicely said, my friend. Enjoyed this. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
thank you so much, vicky, my friend... it is so good to see you Regards, sudhir |
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