Open Poetry #17 |
If Tear Drops Talked |
Robert William Gruhn Member
since 2001-11-06
Posts 168California, USA |
If tear drops talked What would they say I just fell softly From face of joy Satin skin beautiful bride Just said I do Lovely ride down cheek Glowing with true love Another tear not happy I slid burning afire From cheek of anger Could feel the hatred Next tear feeling pain I fell into hell From cheek in agony Wish I hadn't left Then tear suffering sorrow I should have stayed That eye so lonely Blinking me sad goodbyes Tear born of laughter I loved that trip Whole slide down cheek Felt so tickly good What different lives lived That these tears have Short yet so profound Without them no emotions |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I would hope only happy tears for all, but knowing that is not possible, I will just say thank you for this wonderful insight into what a tear might say... |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
This was awesome! Now you really got me wondering what tears would say if they could talk. Sometimes it makes me feel better to cry even if its because of something sad. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* all these tears I am familiar with....You have written about them with the tender feelings that always come with tears. Very well done, Sir Robert. You are not only talented but a gentle, loving man as well. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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