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whiskey

Senior Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 1278
Australia

0 posted 2001-11-14 01:31 AM

" Love within "

In darkened night
My mind it drifts
To a place
That within you are

I float
Watching you sleeping
Are you dreaming ?
Maybe of me or someelse, other

I endevour
To kiss your soft pouted lips
As you sleep
Peaceful

As closer I get
A force pulling me from within
Myself
Me

I wonder
If thou does know
How much I doth love you
Do you feel the strength?
Of love withholding my heart

~ ~ ~

For Dean

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2001-11-14 02:22 AM

Whiskey~
Nice to see you~
I'm sure he will enjoy this write~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2001-11-14 03:14 AM

Maybe you are really inside his dreams, and not just floating above. Nice to meet you, Whiskey.

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

3 posted 2001-11-14 04:23 AM

Lovely ....

regards,
sudhir

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

4 posted 2001-11-14 09:30 PM

Whiskey-
   Nicely penned thoughts.
   Enjoyed reading this.
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Siofra

Senior Member

since 2000-09-28

Posts 551
State of Suspended Passion

5 posted 2001-12-09 05:39 PM

Beautifully done. I love the ending of course.

I am many.

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

6 posted 2001-12-09 05:58 PM

Nice to meet you Whiskey! I bet Dean will enjoy this just as much as we did!

[This message has been edited by RosePetal (edited 12-09-2001).]

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

7 posted 2001-12-09 06:52 PM

this is the love that is. . .

well done my friend. . .and welcome back. . .

-------------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

sodpossom
Senior Member

since 2001-06-15

Posts 723
N.C

8 posted 2001-12-09 06:55 PM

Whiskey

Very beautiful piece!I'm sure he will love it.

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

9 posted 2001-12-09 06:55 PM

WOW!!!Beautifully put. I hope Dean knows how much love you give and feel. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

10 posted 2001-12-09 07:00 PM

(big hugggssssss) Oh Julie, this is sooooooo beautiful! I know soon Dean will see how much he loves you and he will open his heart to you too! (sigh) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

11 posted 2001-12-09 07:28 PM

Great job, Whiskey...
You certainly leave no doubt about your feelings for him...I know he will love it!

copyright2001 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

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