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Can I Keep You
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Can I Keep You |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) 
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When the winds whisper by Talking to me subtlely All the truth tickling my nose Keeping me at a distance With each shudder of noise Teasing my intuitions I always lean in to hear Hoping they will tell the tale Of all that my life seems to be I walk leisurely waiting for it To softly land against my mind The edges of my lips curl up At every thought of you Wishing, hoping, dreaming For a handle on your manner Of all that you are A genius beyond the day Your personality I sense Presence of familar tricks Many dimensions you travel Just waiting for your time I know you touch my very soul At every instance of awakening So much of you is a major part of me Your restlessness intrigues my serenity When sleepiness absorbs your being Is at a time I know you most Tingling across the avenues of wonder Gently ever so tenderly swaying with angels Somthing of you stays just outside my horizon Yet I sense a depth I long to capture A pain I grow to share with my days Bewilderment at fear in what you trust the most Even at the closeness of your grace A lifelong calling of the heart I hold Mirrors at the eternality of all we claim During the unfolding of these untimely years Holds scars of this tiny journey of our life Mixing up and twisting our own personal truth A truth of a love concealed by broken edges Feeling you beckoning at my nearness Shielding yourself behind a mask Afraid of the familiar calling Please let go and come to me In full blessing of the trees Natures purity will unfold before the morning Streams of your depth in blue laced by black Honestly holding me intently grasping my essence Only at the instance of when all calms and lingers Will I be able to stop and hold you forever [This message has been edited by Justbleu (edited 12-09-2001).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I hope that you will be able to do what you want. . . this is wonderful my friend. . . so nice to see you again!!!  -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 BRAVO!!! Oh my gosh, you are sooooooo romantic, I hope that he holds you close to his heart and makes you his forever and loves you forever! (sigh) You deserve to be loved eternally! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bridgette, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* so incredibly beautiful. I love it. **Hugs** I hope you can.  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Sven - Thanks for noticing when I come and go my friend!!! MistletoeAngel -  Romantic!!!! I don't know what to say but Thank You for your words!!!!!I love the way everyone is sooo sweet!!!! Thank You Both!!! Bridgette |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
 WOW! HELLO!! MORE POETRY PLEASE, LADY!!!  Your storm of assumption feeds anger I am calm enough to hold inside. Don't pretend to know me if you've never put stretched out your heart with since |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Hugs back at ya Startime....Thanks!!!  More??? More Poetry??? I don't know if I can write any more....I'm glad you liked it Temptress!!!!! Thank You!!!!Bridgette |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WoW!! This is remarkable! I'd love to see more....please. ~hugs, Nancy~ "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Of course you can write more, Bridgette! This was a wonderful poem filled with a good emotion....write on, bleu lady!  |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Wow....Thank You Both!!!Thanks for the encouragement Balladeer!!! I see even Enchantress wants more!!!! Encore...encore....echoeing in my ear!!!! Bridgette |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JustBleu~ What a LOVELY, LOVELY piece from your pen, sweet poetess~ You've done such a lovely write~ Thanks for sharing it with us all~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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