Open Poetry #17 |
Never Forgotten |
Abigaile Member
since 2001-10-21
Posts 112San Mateo, CA |
*Even when someone you love hurts you, it is always possible to forgive them. I really believe that the one who loves you the most will probably also hurt you more than any other is capable. Time, patience and forgiveness can heal any wound.* I loved you with all my heart and you threw it all away. So I asked of you to end our farce and you demanded that I stay. I looked at you with loving eyes and you screamed at me with rage. I begged of you with heavy heart to release me from your cage. I thought of you with kind thoughts but you drove them from my mind. I feared you like the hunted prey for your obsession was too blind. I hated you with all my soul and wished your presence gone. I prayed for you, I don't know why, and was able to move on. I remembered you from time to time and thought of what had passed. I heard of you from friends of mine and forgiveness came at last. I called you up one fateful day and asked you how you were. I offered you one more chance to show me freindship, pure. I realized that people change and saw the healthy you. I remembered back to better times and offered to start anew. I saw in you a better man than the one you once became. I knew that you had truly healed, and of your past you felt great shame. I offered you an honest friend and let that friendship grow. I fell in love a second time but I wouldn't let it show. I feared the past, what had become of the love we once had shared. I searched myself and found that I had always really cared. I kissed you once and told you how my heart was once more yours. I asked you for a tender touch and you showed me so much more. I love you still this very day and am thankful we are bound. I love you more each passing day and I love what we have found. "I am nae poet, in a sense; |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Very nice example of second chances well done. Gloom |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I certainly believe in giving someone a second chance. You did a good job with this poem! I enjoyed it. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
This was a great honest write from the heart, Abigaile. I think everyone deserves another chance because people are definitely capable of change. Very well said. All writing comes |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
What a nice treat, to see a happy ending here. Very enjoyable poem. Sandra |
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