Open Poetry #17 |
The Copeland Trail |
EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
The Copeland Trail To Gloucester town Bid thee farewell If you're Barrington bound You'd best not dwell Best now to be on your way Out along the Copeland Trail It's been known to make men shy To shed a tear, and seem quite frail Past the bones of fortunes failed Those who tried for Copeland's gold There you'll feel the steely chill As breath it churns, icy cold When Bellbirds announce you've made the top There's little doubt you'll swell with pride But then turn ashen grey to know You've still to make the other side Then there'll come a chance to rest Down upon the plains of old Cobark Perhaps sit a while and quietly smile In a place renowned for the larrikins lark Then be off again for that final climb Through the mist to answer Barringtons call Up past the Moppy, and on to Polblue Trek through the scrub, feeling ten feet tall Be it rain or snow, or searing drought Life abounds amid that bright red dust To see nature's gifts go running free Surely now you'll know the bushman's lust Round the campfire at night You can spin the bushman's tale About how you love and live Along the Copeland Trail November 2001 "Let me pierce the realm of glamour |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Eagle One...What a wonderfully descriptive poem..sounds like quite a trek. Where is this place? |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Eddie, let me tell you how much I enjoyed reading this today. I enjoyed the freshness and flow yes, but I enjoyed the feeling I got from reading it. It was like returning to a spot, a trail or something you are familiar with and that's a great feeling....thank you for posting this. Kathleen |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
EagleOne~ Oh my ... this is just WONDERFUL~ I'm now off to search for more information on Copeland's Gold ... I just love a good treasure hunt~ And a treasure is just what I found in this piece~ Thank you soooooooo much for sharing~ Be happy, my friend~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Wonderful and vivid images Eagle One. A wonderful tale told and seen through your vision. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Eddie, Isn't it wonderful to go back to a place of our memories and it is still as beautiful as we remembered? You already know how much I love this one And for those who want to know (like I did)... http://www.minerals.nsw.gov.au/minfacts/74.htm Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
what a fabulous piece you penned here. Beautiful!!! Charisma ~*TMP*~ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* how could I not enjoy such a trip as this. Absolutely stunning. I love it. Eddie it is truly magnificent and gives perfect visions. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Be it rain or snow, or searing drought Life abounds amid that bright red dust To see nature's gifts go running free Surely now you'll know the bushman's lust Round the campfire at night You can spin the bushman's tale About how you love and live Along the Copeland Trail ==================================== Hard to pick here which was the best.. the wonderful imagery or the cadence... this was melodic Eagle...like a Van song GOOD to see your smiles and rhymes here my friend You're the hidden cost and the thing that's lost in everything I do. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Hi you...man now you have me wanting to take a long long hike...walkabout time again? This was great Eddie |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Eddie This was so wonderfully written and the imagery was exquisite. I hope all is well with you. Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
With starting my new job and my exams I'm somewhat stretched for time so please forgive the group reply. I thank you all for your most valued comments. This area is indeed a place that is close to my heart, I'm glad I could take you there in some small part. And Janet, Van is in a class all by himself! I hope to be back soon, take care! "Let me pierce the realm of glamour |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
wow! what a journey..! sounds as tho you really had a wonderful time... great write..as usual EAGLE friend.. hugs, g ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Yes my friend, rarely am I happier than when I am travelling that trail, thank you! "Let me pierce the realm of glamour |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
I enjoyed this trip with you. Thank you for the lovely and exciting pictures. ME |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Wonderful write, my friend. Much enjoyed this journey with you! All writing comes |
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