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To love her, once again
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To love her, once again |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
He lies in bed thinking of her longing to kiss her lips He misses her sweet caress Her scent he needs everytime he wakes Alone in bed love hurts If she would know how he has changed These days without her have made him a better man These nights without her has made him realized how much he loves her To touch her to kiss her to make love to her He lies awake wanting to love her once again |
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Carol Lina Member
since 2001-11-18
Posts 94USA |
such a sad poem  Carolina |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Oh gosh...so very sad. You have capture the feelings either partner would have so well. Beautifully sad is this poem.  **hugs**Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Wow, this one aches. Great expression of feeling here, walker. All writing comes |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I can really feel the longing in this one walker. Good write. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Siofra
since 2000-09-28
Posts 551State of Suspended Passion |
Why does it seem I have known someone who could possibly have these same thoughts and not admit them? *sigh* enjoyed this. I am many. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sad sigh) Oh Walker, this is soooooooo sad but beautiful! (sigh) I can relate to these feelings ever too well, for I still dream of holding love close to my heart, knowing how much I love my dream girl, and how I desire to dream with her. (sigh) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet Walker! (kiss on cheek) I love you, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walker, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
this is sad. I know how it feels to wish for a second chance with someone. Sometimes you only get one chance! Good Write as usual Walker! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
walker - sometimes it would be nice to go back, but it never seems the same, and sometimes we can't go back... BC |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Beautifully written, Walker... But oh so sad!   copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
Sometimes it takes losing what we have in order to make us appreciate it. I Hope that soon you find * someone that will un-break your heart. God Bless You Timothys Angel Dont let it end like this, tell them I said something. ~Pancho Villa |
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