Open Poetry #17 |
Each Rose Gifted Token |
HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Each Rose Gifted Token Pictures sent my way The August rose of gold Stood in your garden Branches you have hold You picking the roses The picture I remember It is among treasures Saved since September Those pictures of you With cap on your head There among the roses A peach and velvet red The soft lavender blue Yellow and the white Each rose with beauty With words you write All memorised to heart Joy of words spoken Held in a special place Each rose gifted token Your words and roses Treasures I can view Thoughts you express Dear friend thank you HopeĀ© 2001 |
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Carol Lina Member
since 2001-11-18
Posts 94USA |
"Peach and velvet red" OMG this is outstanding! the visuals, color. Well done! Carolina |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thanks Carol , I am so pleased you enjoyed yes the colours of the roses were beautiful Hope |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL, HOPE. The vision of this poem is filled with so much beauty and clarity. I love it. Roses are so very beautiful and when sent (even by picture) by someone we care deeply about their beauty is enhanced. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thanks for your kind sweet reply Karen yes the poem was helped along by seeing the wonderful roses he grows Hope |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Your words and roses Treasures I can view Thoughts you express Dear friend thank you ------------------- Such a beautiful lovely piece... I loved it... Thank you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
You show such beauty through your words.I love the colors of the roses. Peaches |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
It sounds like the words he said found their reach to heart, those of colour read his heard speech My, this had a huge smile painted all over it!! It looks beautiful from here dear Hope! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hope, I could actually feel, see, and smell the roses as I read this. Beautiful images painted here today. Thank you. hugs, Nancy. ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Stunning imagery, Hope. The visuals of the roses were just lovely!! Thank you for sharing. All writing comes |
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