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Blackdrake Member
since 1999-07-23
Posts 83Depends on the day :) |
The pain of betrayel Brands my heart forever Changing me for eternity Cold and alone i traverse the world . The very touch of a woman Sears me to my soul For my heart belongs to another One who will not have me . Mysterious is the shadow, walking down the path of light. ~~ ¥ ~~ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Oh gosh...this is a pain I am very familiar with. My heart goes out to you. I do not know words that could give comfort for this kind of thing. I pray you find happiness soon. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Blackdrake, No false praise. You communicated your pain completely and extremely well. Here's to hoping the healing doesn't take too long. By the way, welcome to Passions. Sin isn't fair, but God got even, grace isn't fair either. larry c |
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Blackdrake Member
since 1999-07-23
Posts 83Depends on the day :) |
Thank you Startime and larry, hopefully time will dull the pain , not only my mind .. hehe :d Mysterious is the shadow, walking down the path of light. ~~ ¥ ~~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Oh, this one speaks of bitter pain, and unrequited love. Well done. Hope your heart will heal in time. Nice to meet you, Blackdrake. |
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Apachecat906 Member
since 2001-09-04
Posts 217Michigan, USA |
Well, hopefully you will not feel so alone in here...I know these wonnerful poets in here are helping to keep me company (even if they don't know it) and I can't tell you anything other than I'm sorry for your pain. I guess your title says it all. Hang in there  |
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Abigaile Member
since 2001-10-21
Posts 112San Mateo, CA |
Very sad. I do hope that the woman you truly love will someday return to you. *HUGS* "I am nae poet, in a sense; |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
I can feel your pain here.I'm so sorry.I hope that you heart will heal soon. Peaches |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
You managed to convey your thoughts and feelings very well in this one. Well done. ~hugs, Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Blackdrake Member
since 1999-07-23
Posts 83Depends on the day :) |
thankyou Enchantress, Peaches73533 , Abigaile, Apachecat906, and Midnitesun. your thoughts of kindness go long way . thank you . Mysterious is the shadow, walking down the path of light. ~~ ¥ ~~ |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
It is never easy to deal with a betrayal of the heart. Definitely the worst kind of pain. You have my sympathy, Blackdrake. May time and God heal your wounds for I know they run deep. All writing comes |
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