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Tell Me If I Do, I Hate Being Last To Know
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Tell Me If I Do, I Hate Being Last To Know |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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I was so afraid, needlessly so. I couldn’t reach you, didn’t know. My heart was hurting, pounding. My gut was sickly churning. They still are. Every time I ever lost someone Seems I was always the last I was never the first to go I hate being the tail, you know. You are too precious to me for me to ever have felt angry If your feelings I don’t know Tell me then before you ever go. My life so full of fearful anxiety Of untold tears in my life history My mind whirring endless thoughts I felt once again I had been tossed. My fears though naught were real and a sick lonely feeling I did feel So please just tell me ever so fast for I hate and fear so being last. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
awww, hugs to you  this touches the heart, as many of us have been the last to know |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sad thoughts but a good write Magnus. ~hugs, Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Every time I ever lost someone Seems I was always the last I was never the first to go I hate being the tail, you know I always seem to be the first to know...but the last to accept. Good one, Magnus. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big huggsssssss) I can't quite relate to these feelings being this young, but I understand what it must feel like and my heart goes out to you! (sigh) This is sooooo very sad but touching, sweet friend, and I hope now you are loved the way you deserve to be! (sigh) BRAVO!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Magnus~ Another avenue of emotive thoughts from you~ Nicely done, my friend~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
**hugs** such a sad write filled with pain. My heart goes out to you. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sue...tis too terribly true tis this.... thankx to thee thy thoughts thought true. Now how is that for a bunch of T's... Thankyou lady... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thanx much Nancy...btw....the coffee is always superb.... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thank you Noah...I am certainly loved the way that I wish.... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thank you Marge...your warmth of words means much to my eyes and heart... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thank you dear Karen...you...the mistress of romance.... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Yes Duncan...very true...and btw...I have been on that side of the fence as well... Seems to be that both sides have seen my face.... |
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