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On My Own
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On My Own |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Thunder in my heart Tears tearing me apart I have no one to lean on Guess I am on my own Strength you gave to my fall Stretching your hand to hold mine As I went deeper in life's trench Only rising from your call Images I had forgotten Gradually, calmly, somehow return My mind shadowed in misery's den I begun to feel the softness of love Time has caught up, now I'm alone I will sit and wait, and dream, and hope Remembering the sweetness of your embrace I will treasure each moment I can trace Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love |
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Carol Lina Member
since 2001-11-18
Posts 94USA |
This is sad, I guess one should never offer a hand unless they are willing to hold on  Carolina |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
This is sad, but a good write.Know that one day someone else will be there lending you there hand. Peaches |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Lovely expression, Daniel. It's important to remember though, no matter how alone we feel, we are never truly alone. All those whose lives we've touched hold us in their hearts. Hope you feel better soon. All writing comes |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* these are feelings I share with you as do many of us here. My heart went out to you as I felt the tears while reading this poem. You have a tender and gentle heart that will surely be embraced by a luckly lady again and then your arms will no longer be empty nor will you be on your own. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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