Open Poetry #17 |
Fighting the foe of fears before me |
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I ride the four winds as slayer of beasts. Protector of a maiden, never the least. My steed does carry me far this night For a maid is calling, I must go to fight. I fight the foes that come in her fears Those that remain from the pain of years. I take them and dash them to the rocks for those fears too well wind back the clocks. She needs a comforting arm which I give An arm around a heart that bravely does live. I come to her with the battle worn face. Keeping her warm away from harm’s place. Rest my maid, my fair one so very true. Leave your fears with me, don’t be blue. A Dragon Slayer keeps watch for the foe. For your fears lie dead before me, you know. |
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Carol Lina Member
since 2001-11-18
Posts 94USA |
sounds like every woman's dream Carolina |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
We all need a Dragon Slayer every now and then! Well done, Magnus. All writing comes |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
mmmmmmm a slayer of dragons....just what I need. Can I borrow you.....better yet where is that clone I asked for. Very well done, Magnus. I love it. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thank you Carol...and welcome to Passions... Hope you enjoy a very warm place for poetry. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thank you LW....yes...we all do from time to time...just helping a friend with words. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Karen....uh...I don't have directions to your house....and Gee..sorry that the clone has not arrived yet...I need to check with shipping and see what the hold up is....BRB.. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
for dragon slayers everywhere. . . well done Sir. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
from one fellow dragon slayer to another... thank you Sven... |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Magnus, Done well once again.To have a dragonslayer such as this.What a wonderful thought. Peaches |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Ah yessss....what a wonder it would be if we all had a strong protector to ward away our fears...Thanx Peaches... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Gee, I was going to say how great this was..and is, then I looked up and saw the name Peaches and because peaches and cream came to mind I wondered if you wanted cream in your coffee? Sorry, I know I am right off topic and a little ditzy today...what else is new...LOL.... Well, all along what I wanted to say was.....This is a great write Barry! ~hugs, Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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