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Fall |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Not to sure about this one, but here goes. As the wind blows and rustles through the leaves The branches sway to and fro from the trees The chillness of the air as I take a deep breath Gives me a feeling that summer has left The colors of the leaves orange and brown As they begin to fall down to the ground It's time for pants and sweaters once more And a nice warm jacket as I sit by the shore The waves get a little more intense As the wind blows hard against the crest As the leaves fall from the tree It sheds it's leaves so that new ones it may bring The beautiful colors of orange, gold, and brown Seem to abound as they fall to the ground And in my mind I seem to recall The warmth and brightness that comes with the FALL Peaches |
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Carol Lina Member
since 2001-11-18
Posts 94USA |
well, this is lovely in it's simplicity you know? Carolina |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
What a lovely scene you've painted for us, peaches. I can hear those waves as they crash the shoreline. Beautiful!!  All writing comes |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
This gave me a vision that was beautiful, clear and filled with the warmth of the fall sun. I love it. Very well done.  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Carol Lina: thank you. Lone Wolf: Thank you.Me too, just wish I was there again at the shore. Startime: Thank you very much.I'm trying to do different things with my poetry.Hopefully they will work. |
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Siofra
since 2000-09-28
Posts 551State of Suspended Passion |
ahh..from Summer to Autumn. and now I wait breathlessly on Winter. I loved this! I am many. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh my gosh, this is sooooooo beautiful! (sigh) The beauty of autumn shines in your lovely words, with all the colors of the wind! (smiles) We all love you so much, sweet Peaches! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Peaches, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Oh I love the visions you've made me see from this poem! I like when its cool out and I can wear pants and a sweater, way better than 90 degree weather. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
peaches73533 - you don't have to be sure about this one, as it is just lovely. A very nice read... BC |
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