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Sparkling haiku
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Sparkling haiku |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
Disneyland fireworks autumn evening jewelight - one duck flies through. |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
The picture you're putting in my mind is really cute. Please don't blame me, coz I do need some time to figure out haikus.  But I juz imagined Donald Duck flying through Disney??  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah Beki, very well done! A magical moment! |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Daffy Duck is lost A Walt Disney wanna be Tossed out by Mickey Giggling here - Always nice to see you Beki..  |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Beki so good to see your haiku here, have missed them. Excellent one as always. Charisma ~TMP~ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
A magnificent snapshot that brought a smile to my face. Very well done, Beki. I love it.   Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Wonderful scene, Beki. All writing comes |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
Thanks for reading everyone, so glad you enjoyed my poem. It was not donald duck I was thinking of, but a real duck...many live in the water around tom sawyer's island which was where I was standing at the time. It was quite a scene, the fireworks behind the single duck flying across the sky. |
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