Do You Not Know The Depth of LOVE...

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Open Poetry #17

Do You Not Know The Depth of LOVE...

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2001-12-31 09:42 PM

Dearest...

Do you not know the depth of my love?
That the vessels within me flow with it.
That each moon which rises, does for you.
For Love...my love...you are my all.

A thousand roses would be mere pittance.
Such a prize for you would be naught.
Diamonds, furs, finest things of the earth,
all just a thimble full of what I would give.

Let me take you into my arms, I will hold you.
A kiss upon your eyes awaits even now.
Your fragrance overwhelms, excites me.
Come, share passions as only we can.

My bed is yours, for there I will worship you.
Your pleasures are my only wish, command.
I yearn to take you, to smother over you
all the beauty of love that my heart has.

Give me your most vivid fantasy,
I will make it your wildest reality.
Give me your hand to hold in mine.
We shall walk love’s sands tonight.

I will leave you only when you awake.
Your heart will betray your lust, desire.
I wait to again see you as you rest.
For in your dreams....I am yours..

[This message has been edited by Magnus (12-31-2001 09:49 PM).]

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

1 posted 2001-12-31 09:44 PM

I think the line about being worshipped really did it for me with this one, Barry.

Well done

I am/Kathleen/

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

2 posted 2001-12-31 09:57 PM

Magnus - I believe she is yours, and you are hers, and not just in a dream... From your writings it shows a romantic who gives fully to that precious one...

BC

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2002-01-01 12:06 PM

This is fantastic writing...James

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

4 posted 2002-01-01 12:52 PM

I could have written this...but not so well. Truly impressive!

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