Open Poetry #17 |
To My House |
Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
I’ve never had much sense of direction, it’s a genetic flaw affecting the women in my family, our points of the compass are off just a tad, but I’ll do my best to lay out this land for you. First, take the old highway till you get to Eight Mile Road. You’ll be on this road for, oh, about eight miles. You'll come to a fork in the road, take the right one, that is, the one that goes right! You’ll be heading south on North Fork Lane. Proceed for a couple of miles then hang left on Lost Hills Way. No, I’m not kidding and that’s not funny. Lost Hills Way dead-ends, just before it does there’s a one-way street on the east side. I don’t think it has a name, Take no-name street for two blocks, or is it three? Three blocks, yes, three. On your left, you’ll see a sign near the barn (there’s a cattle ranch there), a hand painted one that says – Darn Steep Road. About half a block beyond, there’s a dirt lane on your left, near a stand of trees and a small pond, turn there. No sign. We’re at the end of that road, the house behind the house in the curve of the cul-de-sac. Got it? © 2001 Corinne Bailey [This message has been edited by Corinne (12-31-2001 12:05 PM).] |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
Lol, No, I don't "got it." If your poem taught me one thing, it is this...never ask a woman for directions (j/k - hee hee). I enjoyed this. |
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Hypnosis Member
since 2001-12-02
Posts 325CO |
Uh... can you start over again, and maybe write it down.. well just show me the way! I loved this! Randy Meador a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living. |
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Dennis Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 235Indiana |
yep, I got it! I enjoyed the ride! Dennis [This message has been edited by Dennis (12-31-2001 12:55 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(giggles) Oh Corrine, this is so clever and cute, I love it! (smiles) You always write so wonderfully, this is a pure gem! We all love you so much, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Corrine, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Mac Attack Member
since 2001-12-12
Posts 100Ontario, Canada |
Sounds very much like the directions I give to my house also! lol. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
hey! I live on the end of a cul-de-sac. I enjoyed this one, Corinne, Happy New Year to you. I am/Kathleen/ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Corinne--You forgot to give the city and state...sounds like a place I'd like to visit though. Enjoyed the fun in this poem! Happy New Year! |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
ok what airport do I land in.... send up a flare, that might help. Park |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thanks everyone! I drove 1200 miles this past week and started making notes of the roads that caught my eye. Happy New Year! Cor |
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