Open Poetry #17 |
Held In Time |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Held In Time I draw my lips to drink of you a mere fragment of your face glued upon my finger tips is pressed your touch in trace and if my memory serves me right forever will you be clear for when I might have need of you I can still hold you near "I have already paid for all my future sins." Sade...(King of Sorrow) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OneSlickLady~ 'I draw my lips to drink of you' A consuming thought ... Happy New Year wishes to you sweet lady~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
oh I like this very much |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
soft, Helen, very soft and delicate. I am/Kathleen/ |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
May your memories always be clear then, Helen. A very nice write and read...very gentle smile |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
1slick_lady - I can only say that your writings are excellent. Every one is that way... BC |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
I like this, too. You write very well. Always, beautifully flowing. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good write Helen |
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