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Milk-Chocolate Heart
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Milk-Chocolate Heart |
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RosePetal 
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida 
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I know true love exists, I've felt it My heart must be milk-chocolate, you always melt it Sometimes I find myself pushing you away When all I really want is for you to stay My love for you is at cloud heights I know you wouldn't intentionally hurt me but that remains one of my frights We have many magical moments but I can't shake the feeling that I'm a bad omen I feel i'm the average Jane and you deserve better Yet I don't want anyone else if we can't be together Is it normal to have these occasional doubts? Love is a mystery that we try to figure out I'm sorry, I know I tend to be a bit insecure Let me water the garden of your heart With my spring water tears so pure I love you so much, please believe me I see love is a challenge not meant to be easy Add your rainbow sprinkles of love Atop of my milk chocolate heart And let us relish forever in the clouds above [This message has been edited by RosePetal (12-30-2001 09:14 PM).] |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
RosePetal - I believe that it is normal to have some of the feelings expressed in this writing. And I bet you do have, a sweet milk chocolate heart... BC |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Everyone has these doubts, Joanna...and you expressed them so beautifully. I especially loved "Let me water the garden of your heart With my spring water tears so pure I love you so much, please believe me I see love is a challenge not meant to be easy"  copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Yes, I agree, you've captured the emotions very well. |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
I have to say what you feel is very normal! But, you have written this with such love! Great write here!  Sauni @~~~>~~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (BIG KISS ON LIPS) Oh Joanna, this is sooooooooo beautiful, I know just how you feel! (sigh) I believe we all feel this way when we first feel love, but to me, you are a true angel and so special to me and I'll always love you so so so much! (kiss on lips) Your heart is sweet as chocolate and smells like the rose you are! (kiss on lips) I love you, sweet Joanna! You have such a beautiful heart, my love, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Add your rainbow sprinkles of love atop my milk chocolate heart... such beautiful words. floria |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Joanna...we have all felt this feeling...I know I have...Doesn't really feel good, but is so normal... Nicely done, well expressed.. Have a Happy New Year... |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Joanna, this is pretty, and sweet, like you. And I believe insecuriy is very understandable in love, as most of us have been hurt so much by it in the past. You won't melt though, and the risk is always worth it, anyway. Happy New Year Sandra |
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Hypnosis Member
since 2001-12-02
Posts 325CO |
Such a beautiful poem Joanna! I have also felt like this, but in the end love will reign in your heart, and you will be happy with the one you love. Great poem, I enjoyed it very much! From your friend Randy Meador a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
You are such a special lady! I am/Kathleen/ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Joanna~So sweet and beautiful....just like you! ~Hugs, Nancy~ *~ Wishing everyone a New Year filled with Peace & Love ~* |
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