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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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Sometimes love is sweeter than a gardenia, creamy white lovely as an orchid bouquet sometimes you feel like a breeze upon the stage of a midsummer day tip toeing like a ballerina blending like a classical ballet Walking barefoot in tall bluegrass's sometimes blinded by the sun beneath rose colored glasses aglow within depths of your soul craving make believe molasses sometimes feeling like a mink after it becomes a mink stole "To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides." ~ David Viscott [This message has been edited by Victoria (12-30-2001 06:06 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Ooohhhhhhh...this is soooooo dazzling, I love it! The ballerina of love, the orchid fields, it is all such a daszzling vision of love! (kiss on cheek) I almost felt as though I were walking through the bluegrass on a hot sumer day as the sun began to fall. You always create such dazzling music in your words that sing like a music box, I love it! We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (12-30-2001 03:31 PM).] |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
very nice writing-- kind of taken aback by the last line-- pretty neat turn There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Victoria - Sometimes it certainly is... BC |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Noah..as long as you didnt feel like a mink stole ha thanks for peeking in kind sir Jamie thank you..i never know where i am going til i get there ha..thanks again Bill...yep it sure is...thanks bill for dropping by |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Well done, Victoria... I especially loved the line about the mink stole.    copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Nice..but I don't think I will like being a Mink after becoming a Mink Stole.... Yipess....... |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Madam...thank you..glad you enjoyed the read. Magnus..Thats exactly what i meant ha.. thanks for peeking in. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
that last line definitely caught me Victoria. . . great job. . .  -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This is beautiful, and hey, that last line made me laugh, cause I feel that way too. Happy New Year Sandra |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you sven and sandra..im glad you liked...may you both have the happiest of new years..  ~Victoria~ |
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