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Far Enough Above
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Far Enough Above |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan 
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Are you far enough above me, now? Is there safety in such a height? To protect your innocent spirit, From powerful loves might. Have you risen to where the clouds catch breath? Are you sitting near the moon? Are the stars leaving bright dust in your hair? Can you hear a comets tune? Are there Angels near your perfect form? Do their wings wrap you softly about? Do my whispers reach your deaf ears? Have you blocked my pleadings out? Are you content there in the shadow of day? Do you think of me come the night? Will you search your heart? Find me one last chance, To set the present right? Is there room for me, in your part of heaven? For I think I’ve found my wings. How I wish I could fly up to you, And sit where the songbird sings. But you’ve risen to where the clouds catch breath. You are sitting near the moon. The stars leave bright dust in your hair. You listen to a comets tune. And Angels guard your perfect form. Their wings wrap you softly about. My whispers reach not, your deaf ears. You’ve blocked my pleadings out. You are far above me now. © Copyright 2001 Sandra Hoisington - All Rights Reserved |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
The picture of Heaven you've painted here is gorgeous, Sandra. The ending of this poem is so sad though. Well done, I liked the poem. God bless America, my home sweet home. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Sandra, this is so so sad but so beautiful, I know how it feels to cry when one feels so high above you. (sigh) Sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
I see why you like my spiritual poem, yours is quite spiritual too. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
This is so very beautiful. *sigh* your write with magic that flows from a heart made for love. Magnificent visions. I love it. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
Once again, my thanks. |
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