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Open Poetry #17

Lonely Shepherd

craigrk
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since 2001-12-23

Posts 123

0 posted 2001-12-30 08:18 AM

Lonely Shepherd

The feeble written wit
taps through the fog
with an old man’s cane,
while the pompous elegant verse
strides briskly past,
seeking reality at the sidewalk’s end.

… Silently surveying his gutter world
the street urchin humbly wonders
at the tense waves
such efforts bring the night.

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
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1 posted 2001-12-30 08:54 AM

Craig, I haven't seen your first post, I don't believe, but I shall look for it, because if this is how you weave your words, you will become a favorite of mine...

thank you!

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2001-12-30 09:10 AM

Craig,
Very well done, enjoyed.

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