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horse haiku |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
clop clop clop clop clop clop clop clop clop clop clop clop clop clop clop clop clop |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Plop plop plop plop plop Now that is the true horse Haiku. LOL. Top that one, if you can. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*giggling* Okay  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(giggles) Wow, I love this a lot actually, I think it has a nice use of onmatopoeia! (smiles) Soooooo clever, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i believe a haiku is a 5-7-5 syllabled three line poem about nature?? but i liked the read anyway.. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
The thing about writing poetry is that you have to enjoy yourself too..well here's to originality!  |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
mirror man - lol...this kills me..lol. Your dog one is a "howl" as well. Maybe if I would have written pieces such as these, I would have been accepted into the throng. Bless you. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
Midnitesun -- How about: clop plop clop plop clop plop clop plop clop plop clop plop clop plop clop plop clop? Actually, I think yours is more accurate. Startime -- thank you, that is the real meaning. Mistletoe Angel -- thank you. faterider -- you are right. how about: horse clop plop clop plop horse clop plop horse clop plop plop horse clop plop clop plop? I was never big on form. ecrivan -- yes, I was getting bored. Chris -- that one's my favorite too. Thank you. |
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